|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
|Grand piece old friend
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Vividly imaged character sketch in verse - well done, Janet.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|I have always found it very troubling whenever a state takes possession of someoneís property for back taxes. Thatís a whole different matter and one I have battled different states over. Anyways, JC, on the merits of the write, this is another shinning example of how easily one can be drawn towards your timeless creations. I wish you continued success, and look forward to drifting this way many more times in the future. Outstanding, well-written, heartfelt story/poem, Poet.|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Tearfully beautiful sentiments, Janet!
I know the feeling, but you have put it into
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|It is so good when someone has left such a positive influence in your life. Wonderful tirbute, Janet. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|..I love old people..my father is 91 and Mom is 84..they live in Australia ( I live in Croatia)..I miss them so much. I love talking with old folk...they have so much to say..I have so much to learn..WE have so much to share...
thankyou Janet for this touching poem..
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|What a beautiful, heartfelt work of art.|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|A heartfelt write that touches deeply.|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Vivid. . .touching. . .and so, so good. Amazing!! Phyllis <3|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|What a heartfelt write.This moved me|
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
|A heartfelt read filled with wonderful imagery, I could just invision his "rheumy eyes" when he spoke about "Amy", thank you for sharing such a memorable poem! Gwendolyn|
|Reviewed by Cynthia Borris
Reminds me of the stories behind the wrinkled mask of my neighbor. Wonderful reflection.
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|A tender, wonderful write!|
|Reviewed by Frank James
|Moving and memorable.|
|Reviewed by Debra Conklin
|Beautiful and compassionate. Full of deep feelings of love. Simply lovely. Debbie|
|Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme
|Janet this is such a delightful write of love and compassion. Thanks for sharing :0)|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was beautifully moving and a great pleasure to read, I loved this very much,
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|Hi there stranger,
So nice to see you
Ohhh Janet, This write
is so precious...
Made me get all misty
Hope all has been well
Congrats on winning
Love & Hugs,
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
This is so tender and touching!!!! You have excellantly penned another's memories and tho sometimes memories are all we have they can be as beautiful and sweet as the real thing!
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ
|A beautifully written and moving piece!
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Janet....you have penned another heart touching write my friend...I loved the whole write but the following verses were outstanding...Today itís just a memory within
his heart. His rheumy eyes tell me
how he loved her when he speaks of his Amy.
I know that soon, heíll be with her
and Iíll be left behind.
Encased in my memories
and his, this wise old man.
Cheers.....love n luck.....BHUWAN
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Extremely beautiful and so touching.. Jenni|
|Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
|Excellent work. Your friend will appreciate a really nice tribute.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Very touching write Janet...we should be more like the Chinese who honor their elderly...this reminded me of my mom and dad before they passed on...good write...floria|
|Reviewed by L M (Reader)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautifully written tribute to love and friendship Janet!!
|Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
|Great tribute, Janet. Very well done.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|You are a very good person as well as a good writer.|
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Thanks for making a shrine in words for this noble, ordinry man Janet.
And great to see you confounding your critics in such fine style.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Oh Janet this is a precious write. I have had wonderful elderly friends like this. You have perfectly captured the bittersweetness of such a friendship. Congrats on your contest win, well deserved.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|You are a wise woman to enjoy the stories this elderly is sharing with you. Beautiful write!
The taking of the home got to me. I am furious with both of our governments lack of resepct for our elderly and lack of acknowledgement of all of what they have given us through out their lives, just to take it away from them when they are too old to fight for it. Burns me up!
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|For some, life is filled with excitement and beautiful surprises, each day bringing great expectation. For others, it is merely waiting...|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|A great piece of sentiments. I like this.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
|Deeply moving and emotional piece. Thanks.|
|Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
|This is such a touching and heartfelt tribute, Janet!
It makes me almost teary, remembering my own parents, who are both deceased.
Thanks so much,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|beautiful appreciation of old age and its wisdom...|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Love that you care Janet
You have a sweet soul
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|A loving and beautiful tribute!|
|Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
|A touching a wonderful poem Janet!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Janet, I felt the tears welling, as I read this. For to me there is nothing as beautiful as the stories one can tell of a love gone first.
I adore talking to the aged, for they are not only wise but they've seen so much, and they are willing to share it when they find somebody that will listen.
I just loved this. Thanks Janet. Lisa
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
|This is so touching and a wonderful poem.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A superb poem Janet, beautifully expressed...deeply moving.|
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|This is so splendid, and too me somewhat sad. Fantastic write of the memories of this dear man. Thanks for sharing this with us all.
|Reviewed by Kijuana Henry (Reader)
|Nice poem Miss Caldwell. Full of emotions and heart. It makes memory of what happens today and as he recalls the yesteryears. He shall be with his loved one soon,very soon,Amy. Please give him my love from Kijuana(Becca's friend).
Kijuana in Roanoke,Texas a Rural community
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|This is touching. That last stanza is excellence in every way. The emotions in this quite heart string tugging material! Fine work Janet. Memories are quite wonderful instruments. Was a pleasure to read the story. Range my good woman...IS THERE ANYTHING you can't write about?!!!
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|What a MOVING and TOUCHING write and MEMORY YOU MADE TODAY! It is just magnificient! I know you shall cherish the times you have made with this man. It brings back memories of how well I work with the elderly. (volunteering at the hospital and nursing home)
Brava my dear! A contender for the next contest I agree!
Becca in Roanoke,Texas a Rural community
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|Such a beautiful and touching write! Most moving.
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|super great poem Janet, told very well from the heart, in detail, Al|