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Copper Mountain Fears
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

Thursday, October 16, 2003

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On the drive to drop off her child at school,
she glances towards the open-pit copper mine.
Dark smoke is billowing from behind the ridge!
“Oh my god, what the hell is that?” she thinks.
Her husband is at work, somewhere
in the miles of necessary activity
to extract the red metal from gray rock.
She speeds home to call his cell work number,
“thank god,” she breathes, as he answers the phone.

On the road three years ago, two industrial barrels were found,
some sort of painted message scrawled on their sides.
Uncertainty ruled, the word got out, people fled,
the World Trade Center annihilation fresh in their minds.
Her husband came home, her neighbors left,
to stay further away overnight, with relatives,
her family had nowhere to go.
She awoke into the dazzling sunshine of early dawn,
“thank god,” she breathed, inhaling the fresh air.

On the radar of her mind, she picks up the soft sound,
to mining wives all over the town site, it is a blaring alarm.
There are over 2,300 people laboring for wages,
many of their families living in the mine's stepped shadow.
Her husband, this time, is home
as the MediVac helicopter lands at the clinic,
and takes off again, flying over the houses.
She listens, her children arguing over nothing,
“thank god,” she breathes, knowing it will happen again.

Erin Moen
10/16/03
Copyright 2003 ©

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Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang 10/18/2003
Terror felt of a working housewife!
Excellent poem!
Job well done!
Lotsa Love,
Becca
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 10/17/2003
Erin, what a passionate and informative look into the feelings and terror of a mining wife. Well done!
Bobbi
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 10/17/2003
Erin....excellent write....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 10/16/2003
Erica great writing about a dangerous way of living...and yet some have to make a livlihood .... good read....floria
Reviewed by Paul Berube 10/16/2003
Erin, excellent write. A little peace of mind is worth it's weight in gold.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 10/16/2003
Chilling scenes of life lived among danger. Very good.
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