|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Yes, Ashwariya is beautiful and this poem is a masterpiece! I know she is married now to the son of my fav hindi actor.|
|Reviewed by Sophia Barkat (Reader)
|Hey! Lovely Ashwariya Rai goes hand in hand with your poetry.|
|Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Worthy of a modern troubadur (goodness, I forgot how to spell that word...haven't seen it in ages! nor used it)
In short: beautiful homage to youth and beauty.
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|Fantastic...such a beautiful write!!!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent write! lovely imagery and i love Indian women with Mount Everest breasts ;)|
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|A wonderful write that must fill every man's dream. Extremely well described and exacuted.
But for we old crows who tend to be beyond green with jealousy, may we take comfort that someone might see us this way even if our breasts sag, and wrinkles cover the face. **S** I know we sometimes see the less than perfect man thusly.
All jesting aside...this is a really great write.
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|"Luscious" dazzling write...
Love the imagery and expression in this. Missed reading your work!!
|Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)
|Apicture can say a thousand words but the way you captured her essence in words ,we really didn't need to see her lovely photo.
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Bhuwan, deliciously dazzling description of how a man in love views the object of his profound affection. I would only ask the heavens that his vision not age with his body and he go to his grave seeing her ever the same as the day he fell in love with her.
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
|Yes, femininity and blessings of womanhood are to be honored and what a remarkable tribute you have portrayed in "A Young Girl In the Freshness of Youth" truly poetic romance! Thank you for sharing this poem and also the heartfelt information on your Bio page....Gwendolyn|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|A delightful and passionate work! The beauty
of youth is a joy to behold. A Gem!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Bhuwan, this is totally gorgeous as is the young girl in the photo...A very splendid poem, wonderfully phrased...|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Very beautiful and descriptive write!|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Simply a stunning beautiful write of youth..
|Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
|just simply beautiful..Floreann|
|Reviewed by serenety L
|What a description of a young woman! Outstanding as usual.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Lovely tribute to feminine youth.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Bhuwan...I have never heard a young girl described in quite this way..You're words are like honey...this is so moving...I wish all men thought like you....you are worshhiping her in this poem..absolutely stunning write....I applaud you...floria|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Can I get her phone #?|
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|A stunning discription of youth. Magestic write.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Brilliant work Bhuwan I am left speechless again my friend!!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Absolutely beauiful Bhuwan, this was so lovely!
|Reviewed by Ken Colonsay
|fabulous poem Bhuwan... and the photo of the nepalese/indian woman is stunning.... yeah, put that girl on a pedestal by all means!!! Joe|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
You always have the most brilliant write about love and romance and women. This is just wonderful indeed!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Bhuwan, this is so elegant and majestic, a lovely poem.|
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
This is so wonderfully romantic; the words flow beautifully as you describe her. Wonderful imagery too. I especially loved the last verse, it leaves me smiling... Well penned, my friend!
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|She is totally gorgeous (the picture) and the way you describe her.
A beautiful poem.
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|EXQUISITE Bhuwan!!!! You have an enormous talent for the imagery within this poem is superb...ahhhh...I wish I was young again...well..perhaps don't...there is wondrous beauty in every age...
And her face, like the early morning sun
Adorned with the fabulous smile
Disperses the fragrance of warmth
And revives the spirit of the whole world
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
A man for beauty... So does this mean you are going to trade her in for a new one when she gets old? ;) Sensual feelings. Ahhh, love writing for you all by itself again. Woo hoo! :)
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Outstanding poetry, Bhuwan...~Z~|