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A Young Girl In The Freshness Of Youth
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

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A young girl, in the freshness of youth
Is like an immaculate Himalayan dew
Luscious, mesmeric, and wonderful
As the salient cadence of the hopeful


Her breath, like the salubrious zephyr
Mollifies the desiccated ambiance
And glides the tedious despair away
Far away from the castle of the heart


Her eyes, like the lascivious moon
Tenderly speaks the lingo of love
And unites the heart, with the soul
And the soul. with the heart evermore


Her hair, like the majestic rainbow
Lurks down from the sky of her head
And fastens the human lineage, by the
Silken bond of its presumptous conclave


Her lips, like the petals of the rose
Fresh, appealing, and lascivious
Opens up in the garden of humanity
And bestows the kisses of immortality


Her breasts, like the Mount Everest
Stands aloft, with an inherent pride
And radiates light, like ten million suns
And coolness of ten million moons


Her hands, like the palms of the deity
Mixed with divine ambrosia, and
The nectar of heavenly seraph
Builds the temple of universal love


Her navel, like an isle, in the midst
Of the ocean , beholds the flowing
Water of time and provides refuge
For the exhausted swimmers of life


Her legs, like the farmers hoe
Ploughs deep, the barren lands,
Makes it arable, by her fertile tread
In woods or wilderness, desert of hills


And her face, like the early morning sun
Adorned with the fabulous smile
Disperses the fragrance of warmth
And revives the spirit of the whole world


Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
Yes, Ashwariya is beautiful and this poem is a masterpiece! I know she is married now to the son of my fav hindi actor.
Reviewed by Sophia Barkat (Reader)
Hey! Lovely Ashwariya Rai goes hand in hand with your poetry.
Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)
WOW!
Many Blessings,
Libby
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Worthy of a modern troubadur (goodness, I forgot how to spell that word...haven't seen it in ages! nor used it)

In short: beautiful homage to youth and beauty.

Gina
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Fantastic...such a beautiful write!!!
Reviewed by jude forese
excellent write! lovely imagery and i love Indian women with Mount Everest breasts ;)
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
A wonderful write that must fill every man's dream. Extremely well described and exacuted.

But for we old crows who tend to be beyond green with jealousy, may we take comfort that someone might see us this way even if our breasts sag, and wrinkles cover the face. **S** I know we sometimes see the less than perfect man thusly.

(((Bhuwan)))
All jesting aside...this is a really great write.

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
"Luscious" dazzling write...
Love the imagery and expression in this. Missed reading your work!!
Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)
Apicture can say a thousand words but the way you captured her essence in words ,we really didn't need to see her lovely photo.
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Bhuwan, deliciously dazzling description of how a man in love views the object of his profound affection. I would only ask the heavens that his vision not age with his body and he go to his grave seeing her ever the same as the day he fell in love with her.
Bobbi
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Yes, femininity and blessings of womanhood are to be honored and what a remarkable tribute you have portrayed in "A Young Girl In the Freshness of Youth" truly poetic romance! Thank you for sharing this poem and also the heartfelt information on your Bio page....Gwendolyn
Reviewed by Dale Clark
A delightful and passionate work! The beauty
of youth is a joy to behold. A Gem!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Bhuwan, this is totally gorgeous as is the young girl in the photo...A very splendid poem, wonderfully phrased...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Very beautiful and descriptive write!
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Hi Bhuwan,
Simply a stunning beautiful write of youth..

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
just simply beautiful..Floreann
Reviewed by serenety L
What a description of a young woman! Outstanding as usual.
Nico
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Lovely tribute to feminine youth.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Bhuwan...I have never heard a young girl described in quite this way..You're words are like honey...this is so moving...I wish all men thought like you....you are worshhiping her in this poem..absolutely stunning write....I applaud you...floria
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Can I get her phone #?
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
A stunning discription of youth. Magestic write.

Carmen
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Brilliant work Bhuwan I am left speechless again my friend!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Absolutely beauiful Bhuwan, this was so lovely!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Kenny Baez
fabulous poem Bhuwan... and the photo of the nepalese/indian woman is stunning.... yeah, put that girl on a pedestal by all means!!! Joe
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Hi Bhuwan:

You always have the most brilliant write about love and romance and women. This is just wonderful indeed!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Bhuwan, this is so elegant and majestic, a lovely poem.
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Bhuwan,

This is so wonderfully romantic; the words flow beautifully as you describe her. Wonderful imagery too. I especially loved the last verse, it leaves me smiling... Well penned, my friend!

Tami
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
She is totally gorgeous (the picture) and the way you describe her.
A beautiful poem.
Best wishes
from
kay.
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
EXQUISITE Bhuwan!!!! You have an enormous talent for the imagery within this poem is superb...ahhhh...I wish I was young again...well..perhaps don't...there is wondrous beauty in every age...
Thankyou .

And her face, like the early morning sun
Adorned with the fabulous smile
Disperses the fragrance of warmth
And revives the spirit of the whole world

Vesna
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

A man for beauty... So does this mean you are going to trade her in for a new one when she gets old? ;) Sensual feelings. Ahhh, love writing for you all by itself again. Woo hoo! :)

Thanks,
Emilie
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Outstanding poetry, Bhuwan...~Z~
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