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Rain Serenade
by Zenith Elliott

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I love the rain...

Tap! Tap! Tap! Tap!
methodically cleansing,
dirty enviromental laundry.

Tap! Tap! Tap! Tap!
refreshing moisture,
welcomed on parched lips.

glistening droplets,
releasing fragrant rose buds.

Mother Nature's sedative,
listen, taste, feel, see
the rain!

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Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth 10/18/2003
I like how you incorporated the sounds in this. Put me in the mood and the setting. Lovely piece.
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 10/18/2003
mezmerising poem. Loved it!
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) 10/18/2003
Love the sound and the verses excellent.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/17/2003
creative poem Z~, love the rain, you make it even more loveable;-)!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/17/2003
I like the summer rain that best because it is warmer. Nice write!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 10/17/2003
I love rain too, but not to much.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/17/2003
Beautiful! This is so à propos because it's been pouring here for over twenty-four hours after a very dry fall. I love rain and this is a great tribute to it.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 10/17/2003
Lovely, I love the rain, so refreshing and beautiful,

Reviewed by E. Richardson 10/17/2003
Very nice, Zenith...I see you and I were on the same wavelength recently...I posted "Rain" yesterday...
Keep up the good work, lady
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 10/17/2003
Beautiful! and I agree with Lisa: not long enough. I can feel your energy in this write.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 10/17/2003
There was only one thing wrong with this,,,It wasn't long enough! A few more lines and I could have taken a nice nap! I love to sleep when it's raining.
Good write Zenith. Lisa
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/17/2003
Tappy-tap-tap great write Zenith!!

Love tinka
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick 10/17/2003
It rained here last night! :-)
Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa 10/17/2003
Great flow, great imagery. Thanks.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 10/17/2003
Lovely imagery and wonderful flow.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 10/17/2003
Good write Zenith! Yes, sometimes the rain makes great rhythmic beats for the music.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 10/17/2003
Nicely done, Zenith! :o)
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 10/17/2003
Now I wanna go play in it! I could smell that rain...mmmmmmm. Nice work... and you know it! :) Keep throwing them at us :) I enjoyed.

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 10/17/2003
It is raining here right now nd I adore it.
I love your poem,thanks for sharing it.
Best wishes
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 10/17/2003
Brilliant idea..Excellent poem..

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