|Reviewed by serenety L
|I feel so sorry for you. Glad you are over it.
Life can be hard sometimes.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Oh my goodness!!!
this hits hard...just the reading of it...
I can only imagine the pain it put you thru
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Ron...another bold write from you...fantastic
|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
How I feel for this. It's chilling how many can relate to
it. I couldn't help but bet this has an unwitting chapter two--can't imagine your compounded turmoil over what to do about your poor
sister-in-law. Double duped, both of you.
Much Love Vicky
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|I'm sure lots of people can relate...well done...glad it's in the past...cuzz you're too good for this kind of pain...|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
How painful that had to be.
The ultimate betrayal...
I am so sorry that you
had to go through something
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Geez...how wretched. That must've sent you to unbelieveableland...is this what i see, am i going through this? Poor Ron. Glad it's in the past
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|A sad, but very touching write. Excellent and I am glad it no longer haunts you. ~Luv, Trish~|
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Ouch Ron... this must have hurt... ((((((hugs))))))
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|I hope this is the poet speaking and not the person. No betrayal cuts so deep as the one from those we love.
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Wow, I'm left speechless.
|Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
|Ouch... I'm sorry Ron... Hope all is well... ;)|
|Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
|... i like the poem, obviously an after the fact account of what must have been devastating. i think it would be interesting to break the stanza into two parts where you change from referring to her as 'my wife' and then directly as 'you'; also, the use of the word interred is a bit of a puzzle: i would have thought you would have used 'entered', but as 'interred' means that you have buried a dead body, perhaps that was your original intent. hummm, what is the term for a double burial? :)
|Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell
|Sad Hugsssssssssssssssss my wonderful friend ...|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|You have been through Hell....I have read on A.D.(in the past) your story,you have been through so much pain in life yet Ron...out of all the guys on this site I think your nature is the gentlest and kindest,pain has made your soul beautiful.I feel really bad that you have suffered so,no wonder you did that godzilla sketch,give Godzilla this for me please......
and a big hug too.
|Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme
|Ron - this makes me sad. Anyone who leaves such a fun illustrator and writer must be insane....bet your brother can't even draw :0) Peace.|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Sad piece but the flow worked and the message is succinct, Ron.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Oh gosh Ron...this hits below the belt...I applaud you for having the courage to get through it and going on with your new life...this is truly heartbreaking...I also applaud you for having the courage to write it...writing heals...sad and courageous write....floria|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Oh this story.....
Love the pic....
Hit me hard....
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Absolutely hurt to read this...
So very glad you are "long over this", my dear friend...
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
|Oh this one is good.|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|Talk about the kick in the gut...or parts farther south.
|Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra
|Oh boy! ;-)|
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|Ouch!!! Double whammy!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|wow Ron, double-dealing deceit by the one's closest to us, is very difficult to overcome... glad you're over it...|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
I agree with Carolyn, I am glad this is not
your situation any longer.
you positive thoughts to start off your day!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This hits deep Ron!!
Know the feeling all toooo damn well!!
Geee this made me so damn sad!!
hey I am just very fine okay!!
Planning to come back with a finali on the balloon...we must get back home don
t you think?
Ronny and Tinky is still stuck on that "Dream" island remember...hehehehe!!
|Reviewed by Joni Stewart-Hague
|Sad tale, and moreso because it's true ! inexcusable betrayal. Sometimes people can make one ashamed to be a member of the human race......but, always remember, there are the good ones too -- and I hope and pray one comes your way. Well written, well said.
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|This definitely rips the heart out! I am glad you recovered from this inexcusable betrayal, what's done in the dark always comes to light...may you always be blessed! YF~Z~|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
|those were the dark times for you for sure...(|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|So sad Ron Hon, but I bet you'd be surprised at how common this is...((((hugs)))lurve ya;-)x0x0x0x0x0|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so terrible Ron, I am so sorry this happened to you, This really hits the heart,
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|And rightfully so, Ron! I've been in the same scene... and I'm glad you are "over it" and getting on with YOUR happiness...No, we don't forget, but maybe so we can see the lies (liars) before they see us... thank you for sharing this.... stay strong...
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This hits the gut! Great write.|