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I am consumed by this feeling

this burning


screams to burst forth

this intensity gnaws at

my entrails

leaving  no choice

propelling me ever forward

fearless and brave

I shall not be a slave

to delusion.

 This eagerness a surprise to me

nudges gently onward

 finally shaking indecision

denial dissolves

unlocking new horizons.


Exultation never known before

engulfs my quaking heart

new fruits of living bliss

unravel endless vistas

 and deep caverns

revealing a new existence.


Profound joy

explodes into dance

cries in its newfound bliss

Alive again.


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Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
the sheer power that flows through this piece is enough to awaken the could hear this being screamed from the heights of a cliff overlooking the ocean, hurled into eternity's arms...excellent envisoning, poet...
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Wonderful write Vesna!!

Love tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Vesna...I am moved by the beauty and the message of this wonderful write my friend...this goes into my library and this is sth that i will read again and n luck....BHUWAN
Reviewed by jude forese
your poetic freedom is profoundly constructed...
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Vesna this is beautiful!!!! Fit the photo wonderfully, and I love the flow it just pushes and pushes you to read read read to the end!
Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme
As always, full of emotion Vesna :0)
Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Well done Vesna!!

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Yes, this could be a celebration of (renewed)life~thank you for sharing your "Freedom"
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Freedom Is Your Ability To Express It Without Having To Pay $$ For It!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
This has a flavor all it's own... I got the feeling and the meaning... that is what poetry is.. Bravo!!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Wonderful write, Vesna, as always!
Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
sounds like love or passion

Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
Tyler..Master Poet..I give you thanks for your assistence...:)

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
This explodes with life and the exhistance of hope! Bravo!!

Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
good momentum to the poem, but you have some noteable misspells, first, intensity, which I imagine to be mere typo. Second, dilusion (Delusion? Dilution?)

My eagerness a surprise to me

Repetitive, I would replace the first me with "this."

nudging me gently on (Nudges gently onward)
finally shaking indecision (to finally shake{Shirk} indecision)

A joy profound (inappropriate placement of adjective, considering...)
exploding into dance (that this would have to be explodes)
crying in its newfound bliss (and this cries)
Alive again.

Remember, the first line dictates the entire poem.

I am consumed by this feeling

Overall the poem is stinted by a lack of certain grammatical consistencies to wit.

this burning
this yearning
screaming to burst forth
this intesity gnawing at

Either capitalise or punctuate, since leaving the grammar open ended mixes tense and will confuse verbs with adverbs. With a new sentence, it would be screams or gnaws, and to some degree upon elabortation, since the proper punctuation for the first line would be a ; indicating a new sentence structure.
Reviewed by John Bidwell
Wonderful burst of life!
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
I can feel the burst forward, Vesna! Excellent expression when one can feel it... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Vesna, a glorious poem of emotions and passions being revitalized, it's as breathtaking as the art!
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
... the joys of evolving possabilities beautifully expressed.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Inspiring and uplifting. Great write! Love the painting!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Wonderful! Art matches this perfectly...
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
i love the emotion and flow of feelings in this one
So excellent my friend.
"I shall not be a slave

to dilusion."

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