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The Moth
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

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The moth
fluttered on ragged path
and to me moved, delight
I faced.

Moth,
blown over to lighted screen,
suddenly did scream,
effaced!

The moth
drained of future past,
expired, dream life
defaced.

Erin Moen
10/23/03
Copyright 2003

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Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
I'm with Skethman on this one. Excellent.
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
I like the twist in the
last stanza.
Excellent poem!
Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Last couplet twists it..BRILLIANT work!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
It happens sometimes
Cleaver write Erin.......
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Erin, personally, if situations like this, I use a "moth swatter!" Another wonderful and very descriptive one from a master of the descriptive "pen". Peace, ED & Rufus
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Erin you could write about anything...I loved this because well....I like moths...I know they can be destructive but they are pretty....great writing..floria
Reviewed by Lee Ennis
Well done Erin! Always enjoy your poetry!!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Awsome write!
Reviewed by A PAX
I am glad I am not a moth!
well done!
pax
A
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
"The Moth" says it throughout the tunnel of evolution of a materialized desire.

Let the Nobel's Board meet to give You its Prize, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
How quickly life is dashed!
Nice write, Erin.
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Erin, I'll bet he was a bit erased. Enjoyed this much. Those bug lights really don't work.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Aw, tragedy awaits the beautiful moth to dream no more. Nice.

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