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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
10/24/2003 |
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| I'm with Skethman on this one. Excellent. |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
10/23/2003 |
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I like the twist in the
last stanza.
Excellent poem! |
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| Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) |
10/23/2003 |
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| Last couplet twists it..BRILLIANT work! |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
10/23/2003 |
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It happens sometimes
Cleaver write Erin....... |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/23/2003 |
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| Erin, personally, if situations like this, I use a "moth swatter!" Another wonderful and very descriptive one from a master of the descriptive "pen". Peace, ED & Rufus |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
10/23/2003 |
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| Erin you could write about anything...I loved this because well....I like moths...I know they can be destructive but they are pretty....great writing..floria |
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| Reviewed by Lee Ennis |
10/23/2003 |
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| Well done Erin! Always enjoy your poetry!! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
10/23/2003 |
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| Awsome write! |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/23/2003 |
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I am glad I am not a moth!
well done!
pax
A |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
10/23/2003 |
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"The Moth" says it throughout the tunnel of evolution of a materialized desire.
Let the Nobel's Board meet to give You its Prize, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
10/23/2003 |
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How quickly life is dashed!
Nice write, Erin. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
10/23/2003 |
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| Erin, I'll bet he was a bit erased. Enjoyed this much. Those bug lights really don't work. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
10/23/2003 |
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| Aw, tragedy awaits the beautiful moth to dream no more. Nice. |
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