|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|I'm with Skethman on this one. Excellent.|
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|I like the twist in the
|Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
|Last couplet twists it..BRILLIANT work!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|It happens sometimes
Cleaver write Erin.......
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Erin, personally, if situations like this, I use a "moth swatter!" Another wonderful and very descriptive one from a master of the descriptive "pen". Peace, ED & Rufus|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Erin you could write about anything...I loved this because well....I like moths...I know they can be destructive but they are pretty....great writing..floria|
|Reviewed by Lee Ennis
|Well done Erin! Always enjoy your poetry!!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by A PAX
|I am glad I am not a moth!
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"The Moth" says it throughout the tunnel of evolution of a materialized desire.
Let the Nobel's Board meet to give You its Prize, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
|How quickly life is dashed!
Nice write, Erin.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Erin, I'll bet he was a bit erased. Enjoyed this much. Those bug lights really don't work.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Aw, tragedy awaits the beautiful moth to dream no more. Nice.|