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The Moth
by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Thursday, October 23, 2003

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The moth
fluttered on ragged path
and to me moved, delight
I faced.

Moth,
blown over to lighted screen,
suddenly did scream,
effaced!

The moth
drained of future past,
expired, dream life
defaced.

Erin Moen
10/23/03
Copyright 2003

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Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 10/24/2003
I'm with Skethman on this one. Excellent.
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang 10/23/2003
I like the twist in the
last stanza.
Excellent poem!
Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) 10/23/2003
Last couplet twists it..BRILLIANT work!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 10/23/2003
It happens sometimes
Cleaver write Erin.......
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 10/23/2003
Erin, personally, if situations like this, I use a "moth swatter!" Another wonderful and very descriptive one from a master of the descriptive "pen". Peace, ED & Rufus
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 10/23/2003
Erin you could write about anything...I loved this because well....I like moths...I know they can be destructive but they are pretty....great writing..floria
Reviewed by Lee Ennis 10/23/2003
Well done Erin! Always enjoy your poetry!!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/23/2003
Awsome write!
Reviewed by A PAX 10/23/2003
I am glad I am not a moth!
well done!
pax
A
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 10/23/2003
"The Moth" says it throughout the tunnel of evolution of a materialized desire.

Let the Nobel's Board meet to give You its Prize, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 10/23/2003
How quickly life is dashed!
Nice write, Erin.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 10/23/2003
Erin, I'll bet he was a bit erased. Enjoyed this much. Those bug lights really don't work.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 10/23/2003
Aw, tragedy awaits the beautiful moth to dream no more. Nice.
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