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| Reviewed by Victoria Murray |
10/28/2003 |
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Clever Poem, Anita!!! I have always been enjoyed the mysteries of legends. Especially, those written about Atlantis.
Hugs,
Victoria |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/26/2003 |
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Smoothly written, nice story and rhyme.
George J Carroll |
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| Reviewed by J. Pajot |
10/25/2003 |
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| Wonderfully done!!!I bow to your energitic spirit, dear lady. And, by the way, I believe in magic, too. Bright blessings to you and yours, Jim. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/25/2003 |
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| Captivating read Anita,you're right, not even the shadow knows;-)!Wonderful work. Hope your're doing better! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
10/25/2003 |
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| Enchanting write, a pleasure to read. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/25/2003 |
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Enjoyed reading this poem very much Anita!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by L M (Reader) |
10/25/2003 |
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| Excellent tale in poetry. |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
10/25/2003 |
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| Excellent Alanis has always facinated me. |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
10/25/2003 |
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| Anita...captivating write...you have written a very interesting piece here...thank u.....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Vicky Jeter |
10/24/2003 |
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Hi Lady A
Your mother left you a marvelous gift in the stories that left
you stores to express this archetypical mystery woven into the tapestry of so many of our ancestors--but largely unknown. Your second stanza captured my attention. While as yet, I most believe the Truth of Atlantis to be a composite--the suppositions of the second stanza speak to possibilities perhaps manifest in a modern
archetectual mystery called the Coral Castle. A single man mastermind and manifest the entire huge estate--he will say only that the source of his accomplishment is hidden in his private dicovery of how the great pyramids were built. Vicky |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
10/24/2003 |
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| ha ha ha,I love the little footnote 'bout reincarnation ,my mum believes in that too,yeh,I think I do as well,still pondering on that one though...great idea for a poem,this poem was really interesting and held my attention...great work!!! |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
10/24/2003 |
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..wondrous piece..hmm..by the way..:)..your mother is quite correct..think about it!!!
Excellent write...give us a sequel..eg."Far Memory"
oh, go on, you can DO it!!
I'm looking forward to it!
warm wishes,
vesna |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
10/24/2003 |
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Hi Anita,
Great poem, love the rhyme and the flow. I have always loved speculating about the unknown. I guess that is because I can envision it anyway I want.
~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
10/24/2003 |
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Oh I loved this, beautiful and excellently written!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
10/24/2003 |
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This really held me Anita..so interesting.Very well written, as always.
~Chrissie :) |
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| Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart |
10/24/2003 |
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| The flow of this poem really brought Atlantis alive for me. I also saw the Disney movie and thought it rocked. And so do you. |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
10/24/2003 |
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Such a fantastic write..
Enjoyed this very much!!
Trixie :)
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
10/24/2003 |
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| You never know. One of the legends I always found fasintating is that the few who escaped ended up in Egypt. Wonderful write! |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
10/24/2003 |
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| Lady A this was so very interesting...got me to thinking there at the end..and I love the footnote about your mother...great write..floria |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/24/2003 |
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| Enjoyed this poem very much, and I really liked the part about your mother and reincarnation! |
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