|Reviewed by Victoria Murray
|Clever Poem, Anita!!! I have always been enjoyed the mysteries of legends. Especially, those written about Atlantis.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Smoothly written, nice story and rhyme.
George J Carroll
|Reviewed by J. Pajot
|Wonderfully done!!!I bow to your energitic spirit, dear lady. And, by the way, I believe in magic, too. Bright blessings to you and yours, Jim.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Captivating read Anita,you're right, not even the shadow knows;-)!Wonderful work. Hope your're doing better!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Enchanting write, a pleasure to read.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Enjoyed reading this poem very much Anita!!
|Reviewed by L M (Reader)
|Excellent tale in poetry.|
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
|Excellent Alanis has always facinated me.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Anita...captivating write...you have written a very interesting piece here...thank u.....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
|Hi Lady A
Your mother left you a marvelous gift in the stories that left
you stores to express this archetypical mystery woven into the tapestry of so many of our ancestors--but largely unknown. Your second stanza captured my attention. While as yet, I most believe the Truth of Atlantis to be a composite--the suppositions of the second stanza speak to possibilities perhaps manifest in a modern
archetectual mystery called the Coral Castle. A single man mastermind and manifest the entire huge estate--he will say only that the source of his accomplishment is hidden in his private dicovery of how the great pyramids were built. Vicky
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|ha ha ha,I love the little footnote 'bout reincarnation ,my mum believes in that too,yeh,I think I do as well,still pondering on that one though...great idea for a poem,this poem was really interesting and held my attention...great work!!!|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|..wondrous piece..hmm..by the way..:)..your mother is quite correct..think about it!!!
Excellent write...give us a sequel..eg."Far Memory"
oh, go on, you can DO it!!
I'm looking forward to it!
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Great poem, love the rhyme and the flow. I have always loved speculating about the unknown. I guess that is because I can envision it anyway I want.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh I loved this, beautiful and excellently written!
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This really held me Anita..so interesting.Very well written, as always.
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|The flow of this poem really brought Atlantis alive for me. I also saw the Disney movie and thought it rocked. And so do you.|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|Such a fantastic write..
Enjoyed this very much!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|You never know. One of the legends I always found fasintating is that the few who escaped ended up in Egypt. Wonderful write!|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Lady A this was so very interesting...got me to thinking there at the end..and I love the footnote about your mother...great write..floria|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Enjoyed this poem very much, and I really liked the part about your mother and reincarnation!|