|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Hi Susan, I want to echo Rage here... Pain comes in varying degrees, and plays on our emotions... well delivered, Susan.... thank you for sharing... stay strong...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very emotional heart touching write Susan!!
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|susan....powerful write...very very emotional write...cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|This is such a powerful write...your talent for words, never ceases to amaze me.
You left alone to cross out the days
One and the other it goes by so slow
Watching the creek as it ebbs and flows
Seeking the quiet when the heart wants to shout
Wanting and waiting for an easier way out
Sobbing in buckets to please the pain
Hiding in darkness tears power rain
|Reviewed by jude forese