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I just want to be a footstep behind you
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My soul just floats through the air
Over clouds my mind flies like an angel
My spirit is imprisoned in your twilight zone
And my body tries to leave my soul
Or is it me, I just donít know
I donít care for the world anymore.
Ever and forever you always dance
To the tunes played by mine heart
In the stage of my forlorn soul
Tears you shed, but why I am crying
And words escape me, while I am speaking
Youíre lost and tired and donít know, where to go
I just want to be a footstep behind you
A voice inside me compels me to follow you, and
I donít know, where you are heading, but
Itís not so easy to stop you from screaming



Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)
A very moving spiritual write. Thank you for sharing.
Many Blessings,
Libby
Reviewed by serenety L
Interesting one. Makes me think.
Nico
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
I am finding a million names tonight that I absolutely loooove reading! This the depth in this poetry takes my breath. You are a master in your own right!

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
This is very beautiful. Great expression of emotion here! Great work.

*Marlene*
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Excellent poem,I wondered also if that last word 'screaming' may change to 'dreaming'...is it fiction? if not...I am sure you could stop her from screaming if you caught up to her and gave her a big hug...just a thought,I loved the poem,you always do such interesting writes.
Best wishes
from
kay.
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
I love how you portay the imprisonment here, the message being that screaming is something only ourselves can control. But you are there in that persons realm, like a waiting angel.... excellent write...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Bhuwan, I echo my Helen's sentiments. "A wondeful poem." I pray tht the Lady is fully aware of your deep love for her. She is so fortunate to have you as her love. No one else could say to her exactly the words you speak in tones of the rainbow. Well done my friend. Bill
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
An excellent moving poem. Love it.
Reviewed by VicToria Freudiger
This piece -+- the artwork are awesome! Congrats! You touched the soul. Love the photo! Do you believe in past lives?

Shalom,
VicToria
Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Powerful poem.
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
magnificent..Floreann
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Haunting and profound! Great write!
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
very mysterious, filled with beauty and emotion! ~Z~
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
A mysterious and very well done poem.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Bhuwan, both the poem and the photo are most intriguing. Well done.
Reviewed by Dale Clark
This is a moving piece. I can feel the
emotion behind it, its beauty and sadness.
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
A bewildering, pensive write - I can feel the longing. Well done, my friend.
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
The eternal search for meaning. Very spiritual words. I was touched by this poem.

Carmen
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
So many feelings evoked by this poem Bhuwan..great work..floria
Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)
The spirtual blending of souls represented by the physcial feeling of touch.Wonderful write BHUWAN.May your journey always bring you to place of understanding yourself and others better my friend.
Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Beautiful writing, Bhuwan, torn from the heart.
Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Brilliant journey for the mind. Bravo.
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Beautiful poem -- so moving, yet so comforting. Oh, how I can relate.
Thanks, Bhuwan.
Jill :)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
I feel kinda connected to this one....beautiful moving words Bhuwan!!

My last few poems are filled with the same kind of emotions!!

Love & hugs Tinka

Reviewed by Debra Conklin
Quietly expressing feelings and emotions. Lovely. Debbie
Reviewed by jude forese
excellence in subtle intensity...
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Bhuwan, this is an interesting and heartfelt write! Line 13~"..I just want to be a footstep behind you.." is simply wonderful! In all honesty this poem exubes a spiritual feel to it, meanwhile, being mysteriously floaty~thank you for sharing your poetry! :=)

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