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Trick or Treat
by Zenith Elliott
Saturday, October 25, 2003

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Just thinking this morning...a little humor combined with truth...

Love me tender, all through the night...
Passionate kisses, sensual delights...


Oh No!
             Halt...


Tee Hee Hee!


Thought I was going there?


Trick or treat
                       I'm so mean
                                             now back to
                                                                    my poetry!


trusting whispers, tossed like yesterdays news
can cause destruction, depends how they're used...
misplaced trust, packs quite a punch
some hit their target
other's miss their mark...


tell me your secrets...
incessantly murmured in needy ears
i will always love you
you have nothing
to fear...


milking every syllable
extracting every noun
licking every verb
until no more
letters can
be found


mission accomplished
now off
to
spread
juicy
dirt!


 


Words of wisdom for today~~~


Truth plays subtly...on the lips of liars...


 



 


an original poem written by Zenith Elliott
on 10-25-03


 


 


 


 

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Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick 11/6/2003
:-)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/26/2003
SPLENDARIOUSLY WELL DONE....LOL!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 10/26/2003
Truth plays subtly...on the lips of liars...


WISDOM INDEED!!!!!
Perfect piece..thankyou!!!..I hope it is taken note of..

Vesna
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 10/26/2003
"misplaced trust, packs quite a punch
some hit their target
other's miss their mark..."----YOOOOOU ARE AMAZING!

Lady~you have no IDEA what truth does for a soul! Absolute wisdom each time in your den! I love your hell fire. Naaaah, it ain't hell fire, it's simply TRUTH!

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 10/26/2003
Excellent creative write!!!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/25/2003
Much truth expressed here. Thank you.
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 10/25/2003
Creative write, Zenith. I too have a taste for the grammatical.
Amor
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 10/25/2003
Thanks for sharing...
Reviewed by Cynthia Borris 10/25/2003
A trick mixed with a treat. Great job!
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) 10/25/2003
wow what a lesson Z, and I think understood, :)) Al
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/25/2003
A joy to read. And thank you for your kind comments about my poetry
Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell 10/25/2003
Thanks for the smile
very interesting write .. :)
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 10/25/2003
An unusal, but very creative write. Enjoyed.
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 10/25/2003
Very unique write, Zenith. Much enjoyed.
Jill :)
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 10/25/2003
A+ for originality and creativity Z, great job!
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 10/25/2003
Great! "trusting whispers, tossed like yesterdays news" What a line! Good work. You really hit the spot with this one, Zenith!

Carmen
Reviewed by L M (Reader) 10/25/2003
What Verses!
"tell me your secrets...
incessantly murmured in needy ears
i will always love you
you have nothing
to fear..."
Reviewed by Christine Morell 10/25/2003
Very creative form and so well written
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 10/25/2003
Zenith,
So unique and well done.
"milking every syllable
extracting every noun
licking every verb
until no more
letters can
be found



mission accomplished
now off
to
spread
juicy
dirt!"

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 10/25/2003
Zenith this was very intertaining! Such a playful tone, yet with truth! Well done!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/25/2003
Very orginal format for such a sad and truthful fact. Great write.
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth 10/25/2003
Cute. Brought a smile to my lips. This was really fun. It was playful and showed a wild side. It's great to let your hair down once in awhile. I like this.
tell me your secrets...
incessantly murmured in needy ears
i will always love you
you have nothing
to fear...

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) 10/25/2003
"this is a Treat."
"trusting whispers, tossed like yesterdays news
can cause destruction, depends how they're used...
misplaced trust, packs quite a punch
some hit their target
other's miss their mark..."

Today!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/25/2003
Very humorous, and very good!
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