|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
|A powerful piece.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|Learning too late each single time it seems
The lesson of the things I should have done.
There IS no should haves /could haves..what needed to be done at a precise time..WAS done..I believe we have FREE will BEFORE we incarnate..WE set the scene and the probable scenario for the issuing lifetime...everything is in order..it really is futile bombarding ourself with should haves etc...
" You have done well,good and faithful servant"...please remember that..
PS hmm.the next time you love(in THIS lifetime)it shall be perfect!!..You are ready!...:)
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Your writing always "sends me"... I feel your every word - I especially feel your pain in the last verse. So well done.
|Reviewed by L M (Reader)
|Painful and emotional poem.|
|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|Hey....You are showing such strong emotion in this one. Wonderful! Keep up the great writing.
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|"Be done with teasing, please just let me go
Before another dream can make me feel" -----You know how to smack the he double L out of a reader don't ya?!!!
Amazing how you open the senses. Pat yourself on the back. This is pure perfection. Incredible. You bled emotions ---just bluntly.
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Oh John, this is sooo good! Well done, my friend!!|
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|I wish that my dreams would die before I do
hoping for the love that I dreamt was true
but inside of me I know not fate
as I arrived to love, a life time too late.
Dreamy love is easy, we can create it in whatever form we wish it to appear. So lays the danger in the unknown.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|geee another painful write John!!
I know what you mean!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|John this one is too woeful to even contemplate. I hope you don't really feel this way! Nevertheless the writing is superb!;-)|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Ouch another painful one. Great write!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Oh John, I felt this one! Incredible write.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|John...I love how you write...it is simple ...clear....and powerful...I have been told that I write that way...you have great rhythm...and I love the essence of the poem...sad....lovely...floria|