|Reviewed by Sekou-Ajene Tafari
|Wisdom realising emptiness.. great write.|
|Reviewed by Libby Stone
|Thought provoking ... profoundly put! Thank you for sharing.
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Your mind is a treasure..|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Wise words, beautiful work!|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Your words are so true! Existence only exists when witnessed by another. Without another, one cannot exist.
In another word, we all need each other in order to exist.
What wonderful write this is! I applaud this!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|:) You know I love this, Bhuwan!!! You breath so elegantly that which I struggle with! So many circles entwined...no wonder it takes Eternity to hold them all! A beauty, my friend. :)|
|Reviewed by Tarek Hassan
Your writing is so blessed by wisdom, peace and non-violence. Your loving soul is always opening the path for some sort of gentle salvation and enlightenment. I frequently find myself and my writings embroiled in volence and drama in an attempt to understand, resolve and reach out for your sublime rarefied world of all embracing peace. I hope we complement each other
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|Deeply profound, my friend! I know that I exist for a purpose but am yet searching for what that is.
|Reviewed by serenety L
|Nothing exists for itself.
Everything exists for a purpose.
Wise and profound words.
And another beautiful poem.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Bhuwan, You are always on target, your mind is blessed along with your spirit to reveal the beauty of existence...|
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
|Almost sounds like a doctoral thesis.
Your writing is always deeper in its insights!
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Bhuwan, I love your mind! Your perception and wisdom is one that is of the old ones.... and how well you pen... excellent.... stay strong...
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
|Very excellent perceptions in verses.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Profound thoughts expressed here Bhuwan!!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Yes we are here for a purpose
as is everything...
|Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
|The picture is a great choice! And Your essence will forever be in our thoughts. Never to be forgotten.)|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the essence of you spiritual logic is indeed profound!|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Bhuwan...that last verse says it all...excellent write my friend..and I love the art..floria|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Profound thoughts expressed!|
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Yes, indeed! A superb write.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Extremely profound, Bhuwan. Well done!|
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|"Neither can existence
From the essence
Disunited from the existence "... the truth and depth of this, my dear, profound friend and marvelous poet, hit home with an intensity difficult to discribe. Yes... yes... separate essence from existence... and there is no existence anymore.
Blessings and Essential Harmony
|Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay
|Excellent! Nothing but The truth!|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Excellent, profound write.|
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Profound, ideed. (My brain's in high gear...) Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautifully written Bhuwan, as always!
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
So profound, laced with wisdom. A wonderful piece
|Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Ah such very profound and indeed TRUE philosophy from the MIND of the Pan-Philosopher!
Wonderful poem, Buwan!
Please submit this to me for publication in the Winter 2004 issue of Poetry in Emotion (an international issue). I need at least 1 of your poems, as I wish to get as many lands in as possible. And Nepal (pardon the pun!) is so cool!
I shall read more poems in the near future, and select another couple or so for consideration.
But THIS one really hits home!
It seems you and I and Percy Bysshe Shelley and Plato and Buddha are one something of the same sort of wavelengths, I guess.
Have you read my sonnet, VERMILIONS?
You would love it, Friend!
Bye for now,
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Your depth of love and existence is so soul stirring. You always have this process that is so fine tuned. I enjoyed reading this. I liked the thoughts afterward.
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Your poems express the songs of your heart and mind. Wonderful, as usual, Bhuwan, well done!|
|Reviewed by L M (Reader)
|Thought provoking poem of twist so well written.|