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AGeD iN tHe CaGE(a lite Muuu haaa haaaa)
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Sunday, October 26, 2003

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AGeD iN tHe CaGE

You ready for a story?.......This will give you chills!!
'Bout a building in Manhattan, older than the hills
By the Hudson River.......down a quiet block
Standing in the shadows....underneath a clock

Many people go in......but no one ever leaves
No one knows the reason why....or what they should believe!
The door is always open....the lights are always on
Storms can never touch it...or the block it's on

The elevator door is always open, at the ready
It only knows one way to go, the ride is sure and steady
More than a lift, this is a trip, you choose inside this cage
Make this decision wisely..... your choice will change your age!!!

Muuuuu Haaaaa Haaaaaaa

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Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 10/26/2003
Are you trying to scare me? :| lol

God you're creative....ty, Dani
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 10/26/2003
Can't imagine that elevator ride! Is it an extreme makeover site? This one's a keeper.
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 10/26/2003
Oh...this is really good! I like the mystery and implications within. Terrific write!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/26/2003
Very well done! Enjoyed this very much.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 10/26/2003
I'm asleep in my cage.
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/26/2003
A different type of write. I must read more of you .Nice story and poem
Thanks for reviewing me you are so nice.
George J carroll
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/26/2003
Some buildings are best to walk by........Great chill!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/26/2003
you clever you!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe 10/26/2003
Loved this Lady A, but for myself I'll choose something aged in Oak!
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon 10/26/2003
The building sounds like a haunted castle I knew of in my hometown.
I... Well, anyway, this was a very good write.
Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers 10/26/2003
loved this work, gave me chills for sure
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 10/26/2003
Happy Halloween! Spoooooookyyyy.
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