|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|I loved this! I could hear the music as I read! excellent!
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Hey, Ron? Will a piano do? The very VERY first word that came to my mind here was 'infectious'... and then it just snowballed!! This is one damned great bunch of potential for a tune. After the first 2 lines, I was reading aloud.. it just begs for that! What a great piece you've penned. You know what a sucker I am for wordplay and snappy rhyme.. Well, THIS IS IT! Wonderful! katy xox.|
|Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja
|Reviewed by Divinity 11
|a tickling play on words!
and i like the image with it
|Reviewed by serenety L
|Is it supposed to be funny?
Well, maybe I got something wrong. I thought it is scary.
Nevertheless, a joy to read.
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|Oh, Ron - too much fun to be had reading this. Love it!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Lively piece that's fun to read.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This is a great song! Think you got the beat Ron. This was a joy to read.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Ronald this is definitely a song....loved it..floria|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Well I was singing it Ronald! Great images, wonderful rhythm, superb lyrics!So get a guitar;-)!Superb!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most interesting write!!
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|I love the beat of this poem Ron...You bring some fantastic images to mind...Very fine work....As you do! Loved it, ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I won't hire that Jack leg...
I don't know where thaat phrase comes from
A fun write Ronald.......
|Reviewed by A PAX
|this is so clever!!! I am smiling! You have a GREAT PUMPKIN CHARLIE BROWN sense of humor!!!
muu haaaaa haaaaaaaaaa
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|I enjoyed this :) Perfect for this time of year...perfect timing. I am with Kate here 110%! This is really FUN. Read it to my little guy as well (5)...we have been reading together lots lately. I enjoyed ...he giggled and really liked it as well :) To that, I say... fine work!
|Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
|You made me smile Ronald! Thanks... Rodd|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|This really kept my interest. Quite lively, and quite good!|
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Jack got me "all" jacked up. LOL!|
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|I think you've got too many pumpkin seeds left in your pie. (or too many hard ciders) **S** What a lively write. Loved the rhythm, energy and humor of this piece.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is a great lively play with words that keeps the reader tapping their toes while indigesting the thoughts. Great write!|