|Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
|Damn good. You do an amazing job when it comes to imagery.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was outstanding, I loved it! very chilling!
|Reviewed by serenety L
|Uhhh, that one is scary!
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
What a super spookie write...
I love it!!!
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Pain and Pleasure, Fear and Thrill...and Halloween Fun...
smooth, Hart! very smooth...
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|You bad bad boy trying to give me nightmares,I wont be able to sleep tonight now,(we have bats here outside in fruit trees,true)this poem was too spooky,I am trembling in my shoes.Did you have to mention fangs?
Seriously thought Handsome,this was one spine chilling write.I really liked it a lot.
|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
|While this poem had some good descriptions and fit the Halloween mood, I felt this gave us the same ol vampire stories we hear about time and time again. Which is OK, but I was hoping for something different. I felt there could have been a little more originality here. Still an OK poem for Halloween.|
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Sensual write! Only you could do write that!
I like the picture!
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Fantastic tale of dark, sensual and thrilling proportions.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|yikes! what a spooky write, ron; well done! sorry i haven't been able to respond to your writes, but the computer was down for three weeks (they had a virus; the trojan horse crap); today they are FINALLY back up, and i am back, too! even wrote two stories today; check 'em out! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Excellent chilling write. Love it.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Sex and fright in one. Good write Handsum!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A dark, tingling, chilling pleasure!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|a dark sensual tale...well crafted and sinfully told;-)you enjoyed this too much Handsum;-)|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|A real Action/Thrillerrrrrrrr!!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Love it !!!|
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
|No second date or was it eternal excellent .
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|The thrill of the chill! Great write.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Ok Handsum....now I do not believe that you would fear her kiss.....LOL.....all funnin aside.....tremendous write...so poetic..so smooth....chilling tale .....wonderfully written....floria|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Scary, did you meet her online?|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Love at first bite....admit it, he loved it....lol ;)
|Reviewed by Laura Via
|This write made this reader shudder with delight! Kudos to you for such a darling dark write.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Those damn dating services!