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You're My Love
by Michelle R Kidwell Power In The Pen
Tuesday, October 28, 2003
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The orignial version of this I wrote in 1986 when I was only nine... |
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You're my love,
My one and only love,
I've seen you in my dreams,
But that's no reality,
We were standing across the street,
Holding hands,
As we watched the traffic drive by,
And somehow I knew then,
That this was my love.
Original Copyright 1986 Revised Oct.28.2003
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| Reviewed by Tamara Dailey-Keur |
11/7/2003 |
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| Oh, this is so very sweet. I know we have all felt like this at one time or another. Smiles... |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Oakley (Reader) |
11/6/2003 |
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Very insightful for a nine year old, beautiful poem.
Marilyn |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/29/2003 |
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(((michelle)))
you were NINE when you wrote this??? WOW
incredible talent then, and even more so now--beautiful write!
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Sarah Tagert |
10/29/2003 |
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| loved reading this! |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
10/29/2003 |
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| Ahhh... this is sweet.. filled with hope of the young |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
10/29/2003 |
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..what an incredibly aware child you were!!
Wonderful write..
PS have you found your LOVE?
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
10/28/2003 |
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| Very lovely poem! ~Z~ |
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