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| Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader) |
11/14/2003 |
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| MARK: This has GOT to be one of the most exquisite poems I have ever read. If all men were like you there probably wouldn't be very many problems in the world. I can "feel" what you write--can't say that about too many poems. Keep right on writin' on! |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
11/5/2003 |
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This was outstanding, absolutely wonderful! loved this so much,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
11/4/2003 |
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Goddesses in conception and form
Women hold the key to eternity within them
protected by magical spells and ancient invocations
passed down through centuries of persecution
awaiting the dawning of the New Spiritual Revolution
men sense this truth with trepidation decrying the soulful
desire for completion in favor of the material need for
subordination
..indeed an exquisite write..depicting the rise of the Goddess..in the New Age..
Thankyou!!
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell |
11/3/2003 |
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| What a lovely dance you weave with your words...masterfully composed tribute to all that is "woman". |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/2/2003 |
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| Great collage of graphic and lyrical art! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/2/2003 |
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Most beautiful poetry that left me speechless!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/31/2003 |
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| a marvelous celebration of the wonder of woman! |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
10/30/2003 |
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Mark, I accept this as a tribute to woman... you wrote this with exceptional eyesight.... even that third eye.... very well done...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/30/2003 |
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wonderful pic (did u make it?) and fantastic words!!!
all Women are mysterious
with the capacity to make men delirious
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
10/30/2003 |
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A multi-directional, all-encompassing work in regard to women.
Well done! |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
10/29/2003 |
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| Excellent write....you have captured everything that needs to be captured here...love n luck.....BHWUAN |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
10/29/2003 |
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Awe and your art excellent.
"Aquarius rises in her eyes
the delight of inner sight reveals what is oh so plain to see
that all are worthy of Divinit"
Savvy indeed. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/29/2003 |
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| Speechless! First the montage intriguing, then the poetry spectacular! You are very savvy about women!;-) |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
10/29/2003 |
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This is a beautiful tribute to all that is woman and her place in the balance of all that is mankind. Great write.
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
10/29/2003 |
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~WOW~
{{{{Mark}}}}
This is a brilliant masterpiece in every way...form...shape...content...and of course being a woman I can NOT leave out tribute!!!!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by fare good |
10/29/2003 |
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| My king words cannot sum up the wisdom that you posses. The master who holds the pen. Wisdom comes with God, and the stroke of your pen follows the books of pslams. Thank you for allowing me to feel the essence of a true king. Your words are powerful. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/29/2003 |
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What a wonderful write this is. You have captured all the women of the world in your poem.
Lovely write indeed!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/29/2003 |
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(((mark)))
and we women appreciate your kind words and attention. :) and you'll never be free *tee hee*
beautiful write, enjoyed very much! :)
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/29/2003 |
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| cool write, mark; enjoyed this very much! thanks for sharing this thought provoking write! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your fellow texas friend, karen lynn in burleson. |
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