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The sexy smell from your lusty flesh
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Thank you Richard Vallance. I need your constructive criticism forever.I think they will help me in the long run since I am just a novice.


In the severe darkness of the night
without cloistered synthetic lights
I see the desire shining in your eyes
as the moon sets up the sexy chime

The sexy smell from your lusty flesh
Gave a tinkle to my heart and knocked
Me down, when you sat on top of my lap
Caressing my hair with your lovely hand

Our hearts were beating soft and low
To the tunes of the sex augmented glow
Uncontrolled fleshes aroused us both
When we tangoed naked on the corridor

Aroma of majestic sex filled the room
As we stared into each others lusty eyes
I saw the reflection of the moon in your eyes
And whispered the words of love in your ears

You closed your eyes and trapped the moon
In the midst of your eyes, I was so delighted
That I embraced both you and the moon tightly
With the curvature of my sweltering cherry lips

Your sexy body mesmerized my heart, I then fondled
Your breast not with my hand, but with the tip of my
Tongue, you welcomed it with an arousing moan, and
I kept kissing your breast until you moaned no more

Slowly and seductively we caressed us in the dark
You over me and me under you with boiling desires
I then gave you a tighter hug and pulled you down
In the cozy bed and then kissed your every membrane

Suddenly you opened your eyes and set the moon
Loose, It hovered in the dark room for a while
Then hastily from the curtain hole it escaped out
And flew towards the dark sky waving us good bye

Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by P. Michaels 11/10/2003

This is a very passionate write. It's enough to cause those to shy to write about such private things to blush.
Reviewed by Debra Conklin 11/3/2003
Images are rolling around in my head, what wonderful vivid pictures you paint with your words. Debbie
Reviewed by serenety L 11/1/2003
Bhuwan, this is beautiful.
Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll 10/31/2003
Excellent write Bhuwan.
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 10/31/2003
this gave me vivid images of two lovers lost in the fragrance and feel of each other. Well done. Soft, sensual and sexy.
Reviewed by L M (Reader) 10/31/2003
Smooth and excellent read.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 10/31/2003
Beautiful spicy write!
Reviewed by Trixie Love 10/31/2003
Hi Bhuwan,
All that I can say is
Outstanding write....

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) 10/31/2003
Oh sultry and sensual excellent emotions Bhuwan!
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn 10/31/2003
Oh My....I need a cold shower. haha....Wonderfully written Bhuwan.

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley 10/31/2003
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 10/31/2003
Bhuwan this is passionate and gorgously written......and isn't that what poetry is all about...sharing and helping each other....Andre always pitches in and helps me out....this is fantastic as are all your writings....floria
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/31/2003
Beautiful passionate images Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/31/2003
Enjoyed the passionate images you have created in this write!
Reviewed by Paul Berube 10/31/2003
Bhuwan, very well done.
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 10/31/2003
Well done, Bhuwan. My study somehow got foggy -- can't figure it out. I think I'll open a window, now.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 10/31/2003
This is truly wonderful. Excellent write.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/31/2003
Do we now have a Poetic King of Romance and Love in AD?
Reviewed by Linda Hill 10/31/2003
You weave a magical spell, my friend..

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 10/31/2003
Whew! Wow Bhuwan. That must have been some dream you had! Great write! It's a little warmer in the ole Den now! Lisa
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 10/31/2003
I am SPEECHLESS to this, BHUWAN! C'est magnifique...

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