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  set me free
by Sara Coslett
Friday, October 31, 2003

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can you make me be
what you want me to be.
am i enough to love you...yet

that's our enemy
filling moments with things
that are not us
so we search for the greater good
hoping to elevate man
to a pedestal that he is already on
only the fool cannot see
blinded by ignorance
and his personal greed
not realizing he is the is in
all there is
never realizing
there is none better
than man

so i
a lowly woman ask
can i love you instead

lets put off saving the world
to our next life

just kiss me
make me feel you
mon amour, oui
my darling
set me free.

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Reviewed by Ian Thorpe 11/2/2003
Less of the "lowly woman" sweetie, the female always comes before the man, that's how we know the chicken came before the egg.

But I suppose I owe you another chat on the "meaning of life"

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 11/2/2003
I keep telling you that you are one of the best writers I know. Can you hear me now?
Reviewed by serenety L 11/1/2003
He should get the point. The own happiness comes first - then there is time enough left to take care of the rest of the world.
Don't even ask - just get started!
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 11/1/2003
Certainly not lowly, though there is beauty in being humble.
I liked this one a lot Sara.
Watch out for that kiss it might enslave you instead.

best wishes
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 11/1/2003
mon ami.. I trust your tongue was in your cheek when writing 'lowly woman'.. for you are not lowly, but a beam of light fit for your own star.. I shall name you POET DELUXE! and gaze again at this most fabulous piece..It is in my library now. what a WRITE! (smile) love, katy xox.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 11/1/2003
A moving, questioning (not questionable, don't misinterpret) piece of poetry which stands alone. Good.
Reviewed by jude forese 11/1/2003
your wisdo really shows off in this one...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/31/2003
"Mon amour, oui." C'est très bien exprimé ce poème. Much wisdom is expressed here. Thank you for this.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/31/2003
Your mind was in high gear when you thought of this one, Sara...splendid deductions in a wonderful poem
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/31/2003
Beautiful heartfelt piece Sara!!

Hey light Up girl..its weekend....and time to go for a very long walk like I clears your head a "Tiny " little bit...and see live with a new smile on your face...!!

Hey did you forget about the fact that we are "one" in this!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 10/31/2003
You have showered much wisdom here in the wonderful write....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader) 10/31/2003
From hydrogen to Einstein! The universe is just so " amazingly amazing" I think the key to saving the world is to see the simplicity of the complexity, the infinite in the finite, the one in the many.
I like how you have moments opposed to time there at the beginning. And I dig the french at the end... french turns me on.

Reviewed by john zimmerman 10/31/2003
this piece is full of wisdom
only those who are real are free to love

good write!
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