|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|I loved this, this was outstanding!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Great story delivery!|
|Reviewed by Donna Maris
|WOW!!! I love the way you weaved this..
Your words course through me...
to a chilling end.. nice job!
This lady in red..
Do not underestimate
She is sexual power..
She only wishes to devour
She takes you into her world..
You hold your breath..
Hold on tight..
It is filled with darkness
Yet brilliant light ..
Intensity you will feel..
Beyond any in this life..
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Excellent write Erica! This describes the devil so well.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Well, in most men's eyes... but not in the eyes of us gay boys!
:) :) :)
We find our wickedness in other GUYS!
Bye for now,
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Y-E-S-S-S-S-S-S-S! YOU SCORED BIG ON THIS ONE!|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|wonderful write...clap clap clap!!!!!!|
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|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Erica, this is exceptional...you have painted a word picture that shivers the senses...Fantastic write!|