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| Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja |
11/3/2003 |
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Very excellent story of life worded in a few lines of poetry, complete and expresive history of human life.
Greetings |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
11/3/2003 |
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| Oof, buried in submerged thoughts, the mind starts wandering, and wondering. So many lives are like this, Bhuwan. Why is it so hard to open ourselves to the ones we love? You've got me thinking, now... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/3/2003 |
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| Profound! Well done, Bhuwan; enjoyed! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by Veronica Hosking |
11/3/2003 |
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Ironic and so true. Very nice write!
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
11/3/2003 |
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| I love this, Bhuwan - so much depth packed in these few words! |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
11/3/2003 |
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So powerful Bhuwan, deeply moving,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/3/2003 |
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| Very powerful, Bhuwan. Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Debra Conklin |
11/3/2003 |
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| Tis true, this is the way of relationships. Why must it be so damn hard to give all of ourselves, instead of always wondering what the other is thinking and holding pieces of ourselves back? I've no answer b/c I've never been able to give all of myself to anyone, either. Superb writing, Bhuwan. Debbie |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
11/3/2003 |
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..Bhuwan you have outdone yourself!!! Rxcellent..the truth rings clear in this piece...remarkable poetry..ty
vesna |
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| Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa |
11/3/2003 |
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| Powerful, powerful, powerful, my friend! |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
11/2/2003 |
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So well expressed -- you have the gift of poignant brevety. Excellent, Bhuwan!
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/2/2003 |
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Yip that"s so true Bhuwan!!
No wonder I have cold hands and feet geeewiz!!
But a very warm heart.........just like you!!
:)))) < < <wink>>>>
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by L M (Reader) |
11/2/2003 |
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| Fantastic and profound piece. |
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| Reviewed by Sophia Barkat (Reader) |
11/2/2003 |
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Your poetry is like an epiphany.
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/2/2003 |
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| I love this piece in its simplicity of powerful meaning. |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
11/2/2003 |
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Powerful and no wonder I am chilled all the time{smiles}
Taylor |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/2/2003 |
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| a very chilling thought but a true one, no doubt... |
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| Reviewed by Sanjay Sonawani |
11/2/2003 |
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| wonderful poem Bhuwan. bringing forth brutal truth of the life! |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
11/2/2003 |
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Great insight my friend. Your words are focused out of the box. This is a great poem.
Love to you and your half of this world.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop |
11/2/2003 |
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| well that´s the tip of the iceburg, an interesting allusion |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/2/2003 |
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| Bhuwan...magnificent deduction! |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
11/2/2003 |
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Wow, is that why people feel so overwhelmed all the time... excellent Bhuwan!!!!!!!! stay strong my friend...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by ira eden |
11/2/2003 |
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Thought provoking, powerful write. I love poetry that provokes the reader to examine what they might not otherwise consider.
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| Reviewed by Floreann Cawley |
11/2/2003 |
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| excellent..Floreann |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/2/2003 |
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Precisely!...
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen |
11/2/2003 |
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Bhuwan, this was simply AWESOME! The picture emphasizes the poem beautifully. An economy of words, but packing a powerful punch! Congrats on the promotional with QuietPoly.com. I share the space with you proudly. :)
Julie |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
11/2/2003 |
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| Profound thought! |
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