Take Me (At Her Bedside)
by Rodd Jokre
Monday, November 03, 2003
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as we were when we were younger;
Along the trail we walked so many
lost in one anothers eyes,
creating, believing, showing,
one another until the day had stopped,
and we found ourselves
but in each others dreams.
back to when we hadn't worried
about what we didn't have,
but how we were blessed,
with what we did;
away from the arguments,
the fighting, the bickering,
the crying, the lying,
the hiding, and the
...back to last summer,
after too many years;
we found each other,
so much easier to talk
through the small problems,
thanks for finally listening,
It's nice to be forever
as she's done nothing,
but give me what I've always
cared for me like I was the only
one on earth,
and believed in me,
like I do in You;
but if someone must go,
please take me away,
and let MY angel
breathe another day...
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|Reviewed by Tom Hyland
A really deep, heartfelt Prayer! Don't know the outcome, but I've been there also! It's always hard to "let go" of any loved one.
|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|This is quite dreamy in it's qualities. Well done|
|Reviewed by Laura Via
|Such a loving write, very sad but still very loving and tender nonetheless.
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|What a loving thing to say, Ed. But it doesn't surprise me. Good write
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|You made the angels cry with this one Rodd!
Just gorgeous! Superb write!
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Rodd, now I'm wiping tears. This is so sad. Well written with an array of emotions turning within. Lisa|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I'm still thinking about it. LOL Just kidding, this was a beautiful poem and it hit all the right buttons.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|I said many times take me first, but God took my angel to be with Him forever. Wonderful write|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful sentimental write Rodd!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Wonderful heart felt write!|
|Reviewed by C.J. Park (Reader)
|Rodd, another tear jerker. This is very beautiful. You should be resting though ;-)|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Lovely sentimental write; well done, Rodd! (((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D|