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Take Me (At Her Bedside)
by Rodd Jokre

Monday, November 03, 2003

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...in hand,
as we were when we were younger;
carefree.
Along the trail we walked so many
times;
lost in one anothers eyes,
creating, believing, showing,
craving
one another until the day had stopped,
and we found ourselves
lost again,
but in each others dreams.

...with you,
back to when we hadn't worried
about what we didn't have,
but how we were blessed,
with what we did;
away from the arguments,
the fighting, the bickering,
the crying, the lying,
the hiding, and the
leaving.

...back to last summer,
after too many years;
longing, missing,
searching, hoping.
we found each other,
renewed;
so much easier to talk
through the small problems,
now;
thanks for finally listening,
and understanding.
It's nice to be forever
yours again,
finally.

...instead.
as she's done nothing,
but give me what I've always
dreamt,
cared for me like I was the only
one on earth,
and believed in me,
like I do in You;
but if someone must go,
please take me away,
and let MY angel
breathe another day...


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Reviewed by Tom Hyland 3/5/2004
Rodd:

A really deep, heartfelt Prayer! Don't know the outcome, but I've been there also! It's always hard to "let go" of any loved one.

Tom.
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 11/7/2003
This is quite dreamy in it's qualities. Well done
Reviewed by Laura Via 11/4/2003
Such a loving write, very sad but still very loving and tender nonetheless.

Cheers
Lorrha
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 11/3/2003
What a loving thing to say, Ed. But it doesn't surprise me. Good write
Carmen
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang 11/3/2003
You made the angels cry with this one Rodd!
Just gorgeous! Superb write!
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 11/3/2003
Rodd, now I'm wiping tears. This is so sad. Well written with an array of emotions turning within. Lisa
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 11/3/2003
I'm still thinking about it. LOL Just kidding, this was a beautiful poem and it hit all the right buttons.
Reviewed by George Carroll 11/3/2003
I said many times take me first, but God took my angel to be with Him forever. Wonderful write
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/3/2003
Beautiful sentimental write Rodd!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 11/3/2003
Wonderful heart felt write!
Reviewed by C.J. Park (Reader) 11/3/2003
Rodd, another tear jerker. This is very beautiful. You should be resting though ;-)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/3/2003
Lovely sentimental write; well done, Rodd! (((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D
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