|Reviewed by serenety L
|Just try the other end of the dark tunnel. I promise you there will be light. Don't look for the dream world, but for reality and realize that it is even better.
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|This one's a beaut Sara, sad but still a beaut. Where is light found except it be after darkness
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Excellant work here Sara, never give up hope or forget there is another road even in the end!
|Reviewed by A PAX
this is very good sara!!!
|Reviewed by Gary Gebert
|Love the way you've taken me down the path. Just don't let go.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent sharing poem beautifully expressed.The problem is Sara, that in order to find light we always have to go through the dark. Too often we expect the dream to happen before we ever have it;-)...|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|never to late to recapitulate... this is really very well expressed!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Sara where there is darkness there has to be light!!
I will ask my Lord above to take you to that light if I may!!
More than that I can't offer you my friend...because I know how it feels to be in that tunnel...if you look good you wil see me walking right beside you!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|There's usually another tunnel down the road somewhere. Great write, Sara.|
|Reviewed by Debra Conklin
|Things aren't always like we think they're gonna be. We've got to find our own happiness, our own way and travel through a lot of crossroads to get there. Great writing!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Forks in the road is like crossing a busy street against the light, "Youse take yer chence."|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|As Sir Yogi said, "If you come to a fork in the road, take it."|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Sara, Keep searching for that crossroads,,it's there. Give your eyes time to adjust to the darkness so that you can find your way out! Great write. Lisa|