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Kay P M- Devenish

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For Mr. Sweetness.
by Kay P M- Devenish
Tuesday, November 04, 2003

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'Forever' was the wish I made for 'Sweetness,'

and sweetness was the wish He made for me,

so Fate found him a woman whom

 He would love ...'FOREVER,'

and forever SWEETNESS sweetened me

as just ...

A Memory.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Steve Ralph 9/8/2007
Short but very powerfull Kay excellent poem.
From your Pommy Pal Steve
Reviewed by Christine Morell 11/6/2003
I do love your poetry Kay!
You say a lot very succinctly. Excellent
~Chrissie
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 11/6/2003
Deeper than if may look on the surface, great poem, Kay.
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 11/5/2003
big smiles love the waY you said the things you said
what a lady!!!
Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop 11/5/2003
v cynical, well written
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 11/5/2003
Clever play on words, and very good. Love it !
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 11/5/2003
Wow... This was outstanding, I loved this, just got to me,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 11/5/2003
Excellent write...seems sometimes that is the best kind!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 11/5/2003
Kay...excellent write!!!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/4/2003
I think I know the feeling all tooo damn well!!

Stay strong girl!!

Easier sayed than done I know!!

love tinka
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/4/2003
Terse but very powerful in expression of emotion and meaning. Thank you.
Reviewed by Linda Hill 11/4/2003
Loved the write and animation...
The animation reminds me of myself..:)

Yf,
~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 11/4/2003
Nice write Kay!

Jack
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 11/4/2003
Only Those Good Memories Come Alive!


TRASK
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/4/2003
Kay you are such a treat! This is great, love YOUR sweetness;-)!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 11/4/2003
Kay, oh well some are not as sweet as they seem
x0x0x0x0x0x cute animation,,,,,,
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 11/4/2003
"For Mr. Sweetness" has enchanted my soul, polished my heart, and showered dews of grace on me.

Poet, this piece of art is scented with the aroma of wonders.

I wish that all men and woman that are united be laced the power of this poem.

Thank You for sharing grace and beauty.





Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/4/2003
awwwww...cute write, kay! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :D love ya, kay!
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 11/4/2003
Hi Sweetie-Pie,

That always seems to be the way. Kick him onto the curb for me.
Love and Eternal Happiness is my wish for you.

Love, Janet xoxoxo
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