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Daintily, she holds her dress
About a foot, from the running waters
Of a soft stream
Gently coaxing her dog
Whom was trailing behind
Nibbling at her apron strings
As she gently walks across, the stream
Slowly, as in a mystic dream.
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Her dog
Enjoying the splashing waters
As by them, tiny fish swim
Sweetness
blesses her angelic face
As they walk towards a happy place.
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A blue ribbon
Holds together, Locks of golden curly hair
A tinge of princess, is in the air
Just an average, little child
Possessing a royal flair
In her mind, she can be
What she wish.
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While picking wild flowers
She dreams of knighting
Young gallent warriors
For their chivarlry deeds.
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As little fairies harmonize
Making music and songs
Along the way
Near the stream and weeds.
At the edge, of the forest
Where butterflies, entertain nature
And the Castle comes to view.
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By: William Bonilla
9/26/03
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| Reviewed by Stuart - - Macfarlane |
6/11/2008 |
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| Excellent - well done! |
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| Reviewed by June Thompson |
11/21/2005 |
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| mmmm so sweet the dreams of a child, wishes to be granted in the heart of the young! |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
11/6/2003 |
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Beautifully written William.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
11/6/2003 |
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A neat poetic story..
I read your Thanksgiving Box, but for some reason couldn't comment
Great work....
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
11/6/2003 |
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| William....such a wonderful poetic tale....thank u so much....love n luck....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
11/6/2003 |
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| what a wonderful vision you paint! this piece is the kind that reawakens the sense of wonder in adults, and that children just vibe to naturally! my daughter would love this! nice work, poet! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
11/6/2003 |
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William,
An enchanting tale, beautifully written
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) |
11/6/2003 |
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| This is so beautiful and captivating! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/6/2003 |
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A very beautiful enchanting tale William!!
Love Tinka
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| Reviewed by Floreann Cawley |
11/6/2003 |
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| Beautiful William and your love of children shows in your poetry..Floreann |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
11/6/2003 |
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| A delightful read William. Nothing like fairytales and Pricesses. Good write. Lisa |
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