|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
This Is A Fun Read & I especially like the fresh made bed is a trampoline! lol
|Reviewed by Shane Ward
|Just had my grandchildren come to visit. Took three days to clear up what they had messed in an afternoon. But who cares. Your poem describes all manner of fun, which is something we oldies tend to forget. Why not be a four year old again?|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|So sweet...wonderful write Anita!!
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|I hope I still have that 4 yr old in me!
Great write! ;)
|Reviewed by Libby Stone
|This is really beautiful and paints a wonderful picture of children at play...I loved it.
|Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)
|Hey you know what? You just wrote your best poem! Seriously...I think I found myself in EVERY line. That's never happened to me before. Awesome Anita! Just awesome....(gezzzzzzzz I love your rhyme...you make it read like water over the dam. It just flows.)
...love that picture too.... ;o)
You're so much cooler than me!
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A wonderful write
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You bring to memory, to mind and to life the wonders of childhood. Thank you for this offering.|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Children are a joy
The one's who act half way decent..
Enjoyed the write.......
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A delightful whimsical poem with outstanding rhyme and meter Anita!(So glad it's nov. almost d day for you;-)|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Ah yes the lipstick.....my mothers friend was not as impressed with my artwork as I was :-)
Wonderful write full of imagination that I totally enjoyed. Also loved the way you ended this with the joy of the child living in our souls :-) Great write!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Anita, I really liked being brought back in time and by the way it has a beautiful rhyme|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Your words too many beautiful memories of childhood and of my children. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
|Reviewed by J. Pajot
|So sweet...and so true. Wonderful emotionn and imagery. Left me wanting to run outside in my bare feet...but its cold. Really fun and uplifting piece.|