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by Kacie Rahm

Sunday, November 09, 2003

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I went down and visited Hell today,
I'm surprised that I got away.
Satan cracked his whip,
He set me to work,
Meanwhile evil spirits lurked.

I climbed and climbed and reached for life,
The farther the step, the deeper the knife,
I slid back down,
I tried a different path,
All the while feeling Lucifer's wrath.

I finally escaped with barely a breath,
I was sure that hell would be my death.
Satan let me loose this time,
I went down and visited Hell today.
I'm surprised that I got away.

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/12/2003
I am very glad that you got away. Now perhaps you know what to do next time. Thank you for this, Kaci.
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) 11/11/2003
well done. i think one of your best. very creative.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/10/2003
scary, intense write; glad you are okay, kaci! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :(
Reviewed by jude forese 11/9/2003
hell may be a nice place to visit but i wouldn't want to live there...

expressed very creatively...
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 11/9/2003
I tried a different path, ....I am glad you chose a different path and did not have to stay. This was an excellent write, and food for thought.
Reviewed by Sarah Mathews 11/9/2003
hey kaci, nice job, i didn't quite get the meaning...but its a nice peice of work. .::Hugs::.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 11/9/2003
Very good work, and a great crafty piece too!
Am glad you are one that got away!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 11/9/2003
I'm glad you got away...

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 11/9/2003
I am glad he turned you loose this was very good. Kaci
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 11/9/2003
Sounds like you had a hellava time. I'd stay away from there if I were you. Good poem.
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