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Loving You by Susan K. de Vegter Sunday, November 09, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan

It's time to try and move a mountain It's growing in my heart It's tall and strong and granite like It's heavy on that blind part Its knowing that it won't budge No matter what I do It's more than I can understand The part of me that's loving you. I curse myself I shake my head I discombobulate it's true I'm fighting to redeem my heart This beat that says "I'm loving you". I'm used to having things my way And now my thoughts escape To places that I haven't known Have I time? Is it too late ? I love this feeling except this part You're far away...It's true My yearning now is all I have It weights my heart from loving you.

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Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya	11/10/2003

Susan....very very nice write my friend!!!!




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	11/10/2003

Superb heartfelt write! I like this. Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	11/9/2003

O! Susan this is awesome...I think I can relate to this one very much!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson	11/9/2003

Out of all your works, I feel this is truly the best...when you say..."It is heavy on that blind part" Well that is just the kicker...excellently written piece, I enjoyed it much. Allen




Reviewed by Jack Roberts	11/9/2003

I loved this Susan! Very Very nice!! "I love this feeling except this part You're far away...It's true My yearning now is all I have It weights my heart from loving you." Jack