|Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
|AMAZING write, Erica..AWESOME poetry!|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Interesting Even Looks Like House I Was Rasied In,i.e. I'dGo to Mother As 5 Year Old Child & Tell Her I Heard Voices Talking To Me In Basement_
She Said They're Voices Of Dead, Don't Listen To Them!?
Strangely If I'd Paid More Attention To Those Voices I'd Be That Much Further Ahead As They Were Good Spirits Trying To Guide Me From My House Of Hell I Lived In Till 18- Then I Punched my Moose Bastard Father Out For Beating My Mother Nite Before & Retribution My 18 Years of His ABUSE/Beatings Of Me !
What Goes Round Came Around It Just Takes Time!
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Wonderful work, Erica|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|This is spooky Erica! We needed this one on Halloween. Good write. Lisa|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|This is an "Old Wooden House Of Pain" that made a story for the Poet's life.
Memories can prod imagination and take one to meet intuition, and that is what makes creativity the tool of the soul.
"Old Wooden House Of Pain" offers an excellent reading. It is a true poetical voice dictated by the heart.
Productive be Your pen, Poet Erica G. Ivory.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Erica it is great to write out these things....writing heals...you need to go back and hug that little girl...and tell her (you) that all this was not true...((((hugs)))) to you....a very heartfelt story of what can frighten a child. great write...floria|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Letting go is the answer. Great write! The house does have a very errie look about it. Very clever the way you got the ghost to roam the top of it, through the windows, in the photo.|
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Awesome poem. I could feel the chilling energy from it.|