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***** an end.....a new beginning*****









Is there a distance between you and I?

There must be, for I continually try

traversing paths across to you.


Why do I assail your boundries firm?

Is it because of my need to be explained  or affirmed?

Is it the prick of mockery's wing

that provokes mistrust  and poisonous sting.


I have no desire to wake beside you now

 too long  have you bled me of myself ..somehow

so I  release this disordered cyclone of being

and though I may limp in this certain wellbeing

I'll revel in the sustenance of freedom's kiss

Returning to my origins..  myself... my  Bliss.


There's no distance betwen you and I.

There isn't! ..For I don't continually try

traversing paths across to you

for now I know

 you are not my love true .

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Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Oooh Vesna. Sounds like you have turned a corner ?
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
very good
Reviewed by George Carroll
A heartfelt write superbly done
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Superbly done! I especially like this:
"I'll revel in the sustenance of freedom's kiss
Returning to my origins.. myself... my Bliss."

There's empowerment in those words!

Thanks for sharing.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Ahhhh...Vesna...beautiful poem...and beautiful artwork!
We poets must know the same I felt your words
here describing, exactly, my own feelings of late.
"Too long have you bled me of myself."
What a marvelously profound line!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
I'll revel in the sustenance of freedom's kiss
Returning to my origins.. myself... my Bliss

If you try to find bliss anywhere else it will be dangerous, an exceptional write!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Excellent Vesna, this was so well expressed, I loved so many of your lines, just got to me this morning,

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Difficult feelings well put.
This fits my rainy day.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Superbly done Vesna!!

Enjoyed this very much!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Vesna, beautiful poem. Very well written.
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