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Relationship reality
by Vesna * Vanessa

Wednesday, November 12, 2003

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***** an end.....a new beginning*****


 


YES!!!!


 


 


 


 


 


 


Is there a distance between you and I?


There must be, for I continually try


traversing paths across to you.


 


Why do I assail your boundries firm?


Is it because of my need to be explained  or affirmed?


Is it the prick of mockery's wing


that provokes mistrust  and poisonous sting.


 


I have no desire to wake beside you now


 too long  have you bled me of myself ..somehow


so I  release this disordered cyclone of being


and though I may limp in this certain wellbeing


I'll revel in the sustenance of freedom's kiss


Returning to my origins..  myself... my  Bliss.


 


There's no distance betwen you and I.


There isn't! ..For I don't continually try


traversing paths across to you


for now I know


 you are not my love true .


 


 


 

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Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 11/14/2003
Oooh Vesna. Sounds like you have turned a corner ?
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick 11/14/2003
very good
Reviewed by George Carroll 11/12/2003
A heartfelt write superbly done
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 11/12/2003
Superbly done! I especially like this:
"I'll revel in the sustenance of freedom's kiss
Returning to my origins.. myself... my Bliss."

There's empowerment in those words!

Thanks for sharing.
Tami
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 11/12/2003
Ahhhh...Vesna...beautiful poem...and beautiful artwork!
We poets must know the same people...as I felt your words
here describing, exactly, my own feelings of late.
"Too long have you bled me of myself."
What a marvelously profound line!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 11/12/2003
I'll revel in the sustenance of freedom's kiss
Returning to my origins.. myself... my Bliss

If you try to find bliss anywhere else it will be dangerous, an exceptional write!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 11/12/2003
Excellent Vesna, this was so well expressed, I loved so many of your lines, just got to me this morning,

Reindeer
Reviewed by John Bidwell 11/12/2003
Difficult feelings well put.
This fits my rainy day.
John
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/12/2003
Superbly done Vesna!!

Enjoyed this very much!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Paul Berube 11/12/2003
Vesna, beautiful poem. Very well written.
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