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Impetuous Passion
by Zenith Elliott

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                        Petrified, in a frozen forest

                        imprisoned, by limbs of life

                        unable to escape...

                        an impenetrable maze...

                        frantically, searching for an exit

                        sanity hangs by a perilous thread

                        everything shift changes

                        soaked in sweat

                        caused by the game

                        maniacal laughter

                        surrounds the frozen forest

                        insanity impales within

                        impetuous passion


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Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 11/15/2003
absolutely excellent, I loved this, outstanding imagery,

Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/14/2003
spellbinding imagery, duality of emotion...wonderful work Z~
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 11/14/2003
Well vivid, good one...
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 11/14/2003
some heated imagery.
Reviewed by Karen Cino 11/14/2003
Awesome imagery...excellent write.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/14/2003
Great imagery that awakens the senses. Thank you for sharing this offering.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 11/14/2003
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick 11/14/2003
well done
Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry 11/13/2003
This makes me think more of the flesh in which we all live: such a finite prison preventing all that our spirit being is in reality, and it sorely tries our sanity. Well written, Zenith. ~~Bonnie Q
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 11/13/2003
I love reading you... your work always speaks for itself.

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth 11/13/2003
Evil. Malacious. Wonderful imagery. Liked this kind of horror.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 11/13/2003
Cuts to the bone......very fine work Zenith....ty, Dani
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/13/2003
Great imagery Zenith!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers 11/13/2003
wow, the imagery in this took me to several places....
Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay 11/13/2003
Well done!
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) 11/13/2003
Excellent imagery in your verses..
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 11/13/2003
Great imagery!
Reviewed by George Carroll 11/13/2003
Deep and penetrating write
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 11/13/2003
Captivating poem, Zenith.
Reviewed by Candida Eittreim 11/13/2003
Being hunted, running in terror are swiftly outlined well here. i love it

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon 11/13/2003
I would imagine Ice skating through a frozen forest, that would
sound like fun. I give this poem a thumbs up. :0)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 11/13/2003
It will get better
Sometimes it takes longer than we anticipate
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 11/13/2003
this is a good evocation of horror, the cold, the fear, the visceral feel of this piece all combine to create a momentary experience that echoes...good job!

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