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For Taylors Challenge...SNOW!
by Kay P M- Devenish

Thursday, November 13, 2003

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If only I could see the snow
falling Christmas morn,
a childhood dream would touch the scene
and bliss would kiss the dawn.


If only I could see the snow
fall like feathers white,
I'd twirl and twirl and even whirl
as any young hearts might.


If only I could feel the snow flakes
falling on my hair,

my heart would leap such bounds to keep
the joy...forever... there.


If only I could touch the flakes
of frosty freezing snow ,
to catch them as a playful child...
I'd giggle ever so.


If only I could ride a sleigh down fast
'round past snow hills....


if only it were possible...
my mind with splendour fills.
If only I could see the snow
falling just one time ,
if only ...please...if only...
this one strong wish,is mine.


 


 


 


 


 

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Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen 11/17/2003
Awww, how sweet, Kay! Hope you get your wish!

Jules :)
Reviewed by A PAX 11/17/2003
lol I love your poem!!!LOL I am smiling because I live on a mountain, and we get snow here when its warm tempatures a few miles away! We get stuck in snow storms, and cannot get up the hills, we panic at the first snow flake!!LOL...the supermarkets are filled with nervous maniac shoppers...oh no!!! We are going to be snowed in!! And we usually are!!!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/14/2003
Beautiful in its yearning emotions. Thank you for this offering.
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 11/14/2003
beautiful work!
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 11/14/2003
Nice poem. Maybe you should spend a Christmas in the Northern hemisphere. Then you might get to experience all you are missing
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 11/14/2003
wonderful write!!!!
Reviewed by Michael Curry 11/13/2003
I can't imagine winter without it. I thank God for the Rockies and the Cascades. Your poem makes me appreciate winter even more now. Come see mine if you want.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 11/13/2003
I'd rather have Eden than the snow, but we don't get a lot of snow
They got hail in California, maybe you'll get snow.
You met the challenge well.......Kay
SMooooooooooo00000000000000Ch!
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) 11/13/2003
Kay,

Oh this is beautiful and longing I wish you could and Dani see the snow!! It is a wonderful thing but then we get tired of it too so cold...Thank you for taking the winter challenge you di it as if you grew up in the snow...
"If only I could see the snow
fall like feathers white,
I'd twirl and twirl and even whirl
as any young hearts might.



If only I could feel the snow flakes
falling on my hair,
my heart would leap such bounds to keep
the joy...forever... there."

Top Class Award

Taylor

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 11/13/2003
LOL Snow in Queensland.....haha :)

Awwwwwww never mind......we might not get snow but we live in Eden...So I guess we do okay. :op

A fun and very cute write.....love the little gif's

Good to read you Kay..best wishes, Dani
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 11/13/2003
As Immagination Is More Important Than Knowledge!

TRASK
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 11/13/2003
I don't do challenges, Kay, but for you I will try for some kind of snow poem, but will have to wait till it is falling here around my camper...I also have a few pictures with snow, shots of the camper, and my jeeps in the snow, if u would Like I can email them to you, but only if you give me your permission first...Turn up that a/c and make ice cones and pretend your in the snow belt, a wonderful write from a, what sounds like, a "desert dweller"? Peace, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 11/13/2003
Great write, Kay. And here's the deal - I'll Fed-Ex you some of mine!
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 11/13/2003
Absolutely not Eileen...no no no!!! snow in Ipswich Queensland Australia???No way!!it is like a furnace even in winter,I am sizzling here today,sweating like a little pig,I envy all you folks over there with your snow,yes Belle,invite me over for a visit please.
HELP...!!!
I need snow,someone send me some...urgently!If not...JUST write me some snow poems,plllleeeaazzzeee,I need 'COOL'...NOW!
Hot hugs to you all.
love
from
kay.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/13/2003
Kay what a delightful write full of whimsy, and so colorful with your characters.I love it!Don't you get snow where you are?
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 11/13/2003
Kay this made me yearn to be a child in winter.....great for the challenge... a very happy poem...floria
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 11/13/2003
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS, very enjoyable to read.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/13/2003
A wonderful addition to the challenge Kay!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 11/13/2003
Delightful write! and wonderful addition to the challenge!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 11/13/2003
Wonderful poem, but in your homeland Christmas comes in summer, may be one wish you won't have, unless you come to visit me.
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