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let the day play out
by anne cunningham

Friday, November 14, 2003

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let the day play out

let the day play out
let the kite string go
let the winds whip
let the snow blow.

let the day play out
let your heart open wide
let the winds whip
let go with the tide.

let the day play out
let your soul to my hand
let the winds whip
let your body fall to sand.


** for p. because one blustery winter day, kite-flying high, at the beach you said these exact words, "let the day play out." these same words i transcribed to my heart, but also on an old sales slip in my jacket pocket, using purple lipstick, because the other thing you like to playfully say is, "you should write down some of the shit i say!"


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Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) 11/16/2003
Patience is a virtue.
Reviewed by jude forese 11/16/2003
well done! like the light-hearted feel to this poem...
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley 11/14/2003
... that's some good shit~!
Reviewed by George Carroll 11/14/2003
Stunning write.
Reviewed by R. Steven Reynolds 11/14/2003
First two verses are good, the third verse looses this reader. Just a suggestion but think about this

let the day play out
let your soul take my hand
let the winds whip
let your body beside me stay

hope you don't mind my suggestion

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