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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/15/2003 |
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| a chilling write that is painful to read for me, because of a child involved. Though it is well done Erica!You do these extremely well due to your own experience... |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
11/15/2003 |
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| great WRITING, Erica! |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
11/15/2003 |
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Hot N Diffferently Done So!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop |
11/15/2003 |
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| there is a time when she actually senses his presence & intent, what it is she knows he knows & it is against her, for me the ist & ii nd part could have been more developed around that, drawing us into the weird nature of the relationship & it´s predatory circumstances, v difficult to do, but a good effort |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
11/15/2003 |
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| Terrific spell binding write! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
11/15/2003 |
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Excellent, chilling piece.
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Gary Gebert |
11/15/2003 |
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Very, very disturbing subject, but reality we need to think about. I had to read from start to finish before I had a chance to think. You caught my attention. Keep your children close!
P.S. You know there are alot of woodland up here!
Gary |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/15/2003 |
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| chilling! :( (((HUGS))) |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/15/2003 |
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This was sad, but I'm glad there will not be any more victims.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o) |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
11/15/2003 |
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| Hey! Liked the ending. Yep. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/15/2003 |
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Haunting write Erica!!
The pic gives me tha creeps!!
What is that??
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
11/15/2003 |
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| Hauntingly real. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
11/15/2003 |
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| entertaining Erica but sounded like halloween to me. cheers G |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
11/15/2003 |
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| Gave me cold chills, toooo real for comfort, well done. |
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