|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Gripping and wonderful in its expressive nature. Thank you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Gary Gebert
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Alway be at the ready to alter your dreams, for what comes to pass may be far better than your most hopefull dream.|
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|A most excellent write Erica, I love the line about the one tear filled with a thousand hopes and dreams...wonderfully done.
|Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
|Excellent. I love this part:
I hear it's soft echo of death
as it hits the floor below.
A sad sound.
Because that one tear..
was once filled with a thousand
hopes and dreams.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Fantastic write....one of ure very best....love n luck....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Even one tear dear Erica can help us break the dammed up emotional turmoil that goes on inside our hearts. Just one little tear can carry a flood of healing fluid or fill an ocean inside of us. When a tear dries up, hopefully it has served a noble purpose. You are with us always Erica and can shed a tear or two or more among your friends at AD. God bless you. Bill|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Tears are beneficial, Erica, but so is laughter and optimism. Nice poem, nonetheless and even with . . . despair.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|So poignantly beautiful.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Erica, this is just beautiful. So well written even if it was long ago. Lisa|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|This is sad; but it's beautifully-written.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)