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Looking in.
by Kay P M- Devenish

Thursday, November 20, 2003

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Outside your world I watch a place
that I have longed to be ,
through the thick walls that you built ,
to keep out trace of me.
I watch you like a wondering child
( nose pressed to pane for sight , )




cliquish there ,


THE CHOSEN share,
in groups ...forever tight.
Being on the outside ,( by endemic brand ,)
in a place condoned by you....
I watch...from OUTCAST'S land.


Copyright Kay P M-Devenish


 


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Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 11/28/2003
WOW!!!!

This is the real McCoy!!! Really strong, and damn fantastic.

Loved it, ty, Dani
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader) 11/21/2003
what sad words Kay..noone deserves to be placed here.
A beautiful write.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 11/21/2003
A very unique write, pulls at the heart strings. If anyone has left you on the outside Kay, it is definitely their loss!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 11/21/2003
Very interesting, Kay! Enjoyed this!
Reviewed by jude forese 11/20/2003
well done!
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 11/20/2003
Good work Kay and a cute smiley face
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 11/20/2003
Awesome write kate. love it.

peg
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/20/2003
Awesome write Kay! I almost missed it, there are so many names now and they keep shifting around as the board changes, it's a challenge isn't it?;-)Love this poem and your little guys are so adorable,me peeks back at you;-)
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 11/20/2003
Ah Kay, this was lovely, beautifully written,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 11/20/2003
I like this and I peek a boo to you too kay...floria
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 11/20/2003
Great write!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/20/2003
Peek a boo Kay!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by A PAX 11/20/2003
oh i like this!!!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 11/20/2003
Excellent write Kay. Enjoyed.
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 11/20/2003
Very nice Kay! Peek a boo to you too! lol

Jack
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