|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Sigh...another for my library. this is excellent|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Susan, the pain and anguish in your poem are very strong emotions. Although the hands which hold the rose in your picture seem strong.|
|Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay
|Powerful feeling! Well done!|
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
This touched me..
"Seeking the quiet when the heart wants to shout
Wanting and waiting for an easier way out
Sobbing in buckets
Pleasing the pain
Hiding in darkness
Tears power the rain "
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|"Age taking family with a peeling death knoll
Angel of Mercy has you on hold "
Susan you just wrote my life story...I can truly relate to this masterpiece...well done girl.....floria
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
|Well portrayed emotion, nicely done.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent write Susan!!
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Well done Susan!! I like this!!
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|This is super, I feel it to be one of your best yet. It so thick with emotion, you can slice it with a knife. Excellent write, from an excellent writer. Bravo to this piece.