Sad brown eyes.
by Tonya Iasisen
Sunday, November 23, 2003
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Your sad brown eyes
Are looking at me,
Your sad brown eyes
So, big, so innocent and naive,
Your sad brown eyes
Gently holding tears within,
Your sad brown eyes
Tell a different story
From the smile you wear,
Your sad brown eyes
Hold the key to your soul
They know everything,
The feelings you hide inside,
Your sad brown eyes
Are beautiful, you should know it.
So why do you hide,
You try to disguise
The happiness beyond
Your brown sad eyes?
Let them tell you a story,
With tears and looks
That tear your heart
When you look into your own
Sad brown eyes,
Do not be scared.
Tears do help.
Do not drown in emptyness.
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| Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja |
12/3/2003 |
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Hi Tonya.
It is quite nice poem indeed. Well written.
Greetings and blessings from Atlanta.
Goreja.com |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/24/2003 |
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| Beautifully and sensitively expressed. It is true that the eyes don't belie the feelings hidden behind them. Thank you for this offering, Tonya. ...Regis |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
11/23/2003 |
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"Tears do help," yes tears do help but some people are psyched out so that they think something is wrong with crying, especially some men.
Read and enjoyed. Peace G |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
11/23/2003 |
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Wonderful write.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
11/23/2003 |
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| I have a soft spot for a man with brown eyes. Enjoyed this. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
11/23/2003 |
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This is a beautiful write, Tonya, it is full of depth of emotion, this line esp. touched me "Your sad brown eyes Hold the key to your soul"
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