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Free To Love Again
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

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Free To Love Again

You come,
Daring the shadows,
And the wild land,
You’ve never seen,
To save me,
From my doom...

I see you,
With love in your eyes,
Wondering if I dare,
Let you enter the room,
I have boarded up,
And shut forever...

You whisper to my ears,
But it is my heart who hears,
Your gentle words of love,
And truth and loyalty...

Give you a chance you ask,
To prove your love is true ,
And I wonder,
If I can trust you...

My heart beats,
With love I can’t reveal,
With hope I can’t conceal,
With dreams I hope are real...

You have given me a gift,
Wrapped so carefully and beautifully,
I pull the ribbon and look inside,
And what I see,
Makes me cry...

Your heart lies in the box,
On red velvet,
Beating for me,
And I wonder if you see,

How much this meant to me,
You say,
I hold your life in my hands,
That you want me to love this man,
Who stands before me,

I wish I could convey,
How much I love you in every way,
How I see your smile in my dreams at night,
How the thought of you waiting,
Eases my fright,
Of being alone forever in the world...

Will you take my hand,
Let me join you,
Show you my land,
Show you how I live here,
Learning to love you without fear...

I love your eyes,
I love your soft voice,
Leaving me no choice,
But to love you forever,
To care for you,
More than my own life,
To one day say yes,
To being your wife...

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Reviewed by Franz Kessler 3/8/2004
Wonderful expression of soft and caring love, that reaches beyond disappointment and sorrow. Great poem. Franz
Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield 12/17/2003
A beautiful expression of love! A wondrous write...
Congrats on the poetry contest! Very well deserved!!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 12/4/2003
Truly beautiful work.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 11/30/2003
Truly beautiful and very romantic writing Rein!
As always your work pleases, brings smiles and reminds of sweet memories!
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 11/30/2003
Very silky-smooth romance, Reindeer.
Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader) 11/30/2003
So beautifully written and expressed those who are kindred spirits can hear each other calling in the nightime.
Reviewed by Trixie Love 11/30/2003
Beautiful write, Reindeer.

Trixie :)
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 11/29/2003
Yes dear heart, you are extraordinary in your expressions. Your poems are clearly works of art. Bill
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 11/29/2003
A wonderful moment in everyone's life -- so well expressed.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/28/2003
Exquisite expression of passionate emotions of love. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace, Regis.
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) 11/28/2003
well crafted and so heartfelt. well done.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 11/28/2003
Reindeer this is gorgeous...romantic and so well written ..... I will try to visit your site soon...floria
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 11/28/2003
'Your heart lies in the box,
On red velvet,
Beating for me'

Truly beautiful words, Reindeer.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 11/28/2003
And don't you write it all down so beautifully.......ty, Dani
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 11/27/2003
beauty upon beauty upon testimony!
Reviewed by Claywoman 11/27/2003
This is beautiful! I loved every word, you are a poet, and a damned good one!
Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader) 11/27/2003
Truly sings, Reindeer. Very well done.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/27/2003
Awesome Retta!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by A PAX 11/27/2003
so so romantic!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 11/27/2003
You have given your all in this romatic one..
Hope your Thanksgiving has been a plesant one..
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 11/27/2003
Very romantic!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/27/2003
Beautiflly expressed! Such an elegant feeling of love in this one Rein...
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 11/27/2003

Reviewed by Jack Roberts 11/27/2003
Ahhhh Reindeer, this is sooo pretty!! Love it!

I love your eyes,
I love your soft voice,
Leaving me no choice,
But to love you forever,
To care for you,
More than my own life,
To one day say yes,
To being your wife...

Reviewed by Tami Ryan 11/27/2003
Absolutely wonderful expresssion, Reindeer! Exquisitely done.

Reviewed by jude forese 11/27/2003
a very beautiful testimony of love ...
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) 11/27/2003
This is excellent ... So cute and really beautiful... What a beautiful and cute Care ... Respect and Goodness in you thoughts .. Really so nice to read it
Reviewed by George Carroll 11/27/2003
Love is in the air tonight. Loving and heartfelt write

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