Paul.. I'm speechless.. but I can type! The visuals are mind-bending here, but it's the flowing build, quiet but with great power, that brought an audible response when I finished reading.. my first word was 'wow'.. this is a work of art on every level that is called art! It has passion, desolation, suspense and real beauty.. a story in brief verses.. one of your best, in my humble opinion. WOW! katy xox.