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Ageless longing
by Vesna * Vanessa

Friday, December 05, 2003

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I long the ageless longing

the ancient desire to simply be

for the fires of Love consume me

from which I cannot flee



Ilong for the breeze of

love's touch

 the colours of a new dawn's lush

  the seeming confusion

of a lover's tremor

as he presses lips in dilemma

upon heaving wanton breasts



clouds of illusion have hidden the one

I know as my blazing Sun

and though fear has risen its ugly head

my Love bleeds the nectar of loins' shed

erupting upon the smoothness of bare skin

with an ardour surpassing Odin



I have starved succumbing to fool's gold

while clamorous voices swayed my heart sold

to whims of foolish thought that fled

from hopes of fulfillment in my bed



this lullabying longing of dawn's first song

enraptures in embraces long

my heart and soul praying

in lightwaves swaying

within this burning heart of mine

which pours ecstatic love sublime

upon the one that is I

forever entwined.. never to die


for that I long

and that I desire

always to burn within Love's fire!








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Reviewed by Liana Margiva 1/14/2008
Beautiful, romantic, talented!!!!!!!!! 'Clouds of illusion have hidden the one',,,, ...'My heart sold'.... Very nice, talented!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Peter Paton 8/13/2004
Intense and burning to the twin soul of love Vesna
Love is a burning fire..........A Ring of Fire.......
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick 1/13/2004
strongly written
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 12/7/2003
hey, this was a joy to read, raw poetic love expression from the soul. cheers G
Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader) 12/6/2003
"always to burn within Love's fire!" thats what life is for:))..very passionate ,so mucg strength,as only love can know..excellant
Reviewed by John Bidwell 12/6/2003
I can only sigh...and in this cold world see my breath...and wonder for a moment...if like a cloud, I can make out the image of my beloveded, ghostly as the moisture vanishes. Where did it go?
Perhaps in my tears?
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/6/2003
Beautiful Passionate write Vesna!!


love tinka
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 12/5/2003
EXCELLENT depth and emotional longing. VESNA.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/5/2003
I've said it before and I know that I am not the first but, as you put it in such a lyrical fashion; love is all. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis.
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 12/5/2003
for that I long

and that I desire
And ageless longing, indeed, Vesna and your expressions are felt here.... stay strong...
In Spirit,

always to burn within Love's fire!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 12/5/2003
Georgeous write indeed; and beautiful picture.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/5/2003
You have captured the essence of the intense longing for the twin flame. Your beauty of phrase is superb!Your passion is wonderful! Never lose it!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 12/5/2003
Passionate and longing as a twin soul only knows how to convey..
"clouds of illusion have hidden the one

I know as my blazing Sun

and though fear has risen its ugly head

my Love bleeds the nectar of loins' shed

erupting upon the smoothness of bare skin

with an ardour surpassing Odin"

Reviewed by Kate Clifford 12/5/2003
The passion in this, is beautiful! Great write!
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 12/5/2003
There is such intense passion in this, Vesna. The elements of love are intermingled well in the imagery of this work.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/5/2003
Beautiful write, as always, Vesna! Enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by George Carroll 12/5/2003
Loves passion has no equal
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