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|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|What a write it was thrilling and chilling well worth the read awesome thanks for the spind tingler|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|I've been dead too, just starting to live actually. Fantastic piece. Blessings, Janet|
|Reviewed by Silvia
|"When will the paradox end?" beautiful!
This poem is truly fantastic...it gave me a chill up my spine.I had this kind of feelings once while staring at the dead body of my best friend ...it was a paradox to me 'cause I still could feel her breath.What was going to happen to her? I shed a few tears after reading your poem.
Thanks for sharing.