|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was beautiful and so lovely Bhuwan! I loved this so much,
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|I agree with Crystal-Rain...Ronnie...we need more of you.
This is so beautiful it brought tears to my eyes. I can
taste the cotton candy! Ed Kostro is right...you should check
out selling these marvels to card companies. I know they are
very personal writings...but that is what women want to read
in a greeting card.
Oh...yes...you knew that.
"Lavender diamonds"...I like that. Yes, yes.
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|An absolute beauty!|
|Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
|This is so good. You're one of those rare men that knows how to express yourself so beautifully. Believe me, we need more of you!|
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Beautifully irresistable. All the guys I've ever met, thought romance belonged in the discarded chapter of a bad novel. Where did I go wrong? You're like finding a daisy in Alaska in the middle of winter. Wow!
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This is an amazing poem...quite stunning!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
OOOOH this is os beautiful....
"Let me fly to the clouds
And triple spin her
A candy fluff
Sweeter than spun sugar
That flirts with her tastebuds
And stains her dreams
With the drippings
Of romantic sweetness
Let me fly to the home
Of ancient mythology
And strip Aphrodite of her title
And rewrite history
Declaring my ladylove
As the real goddess
Of love & beauty"
Gorgeous moving piece.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Where did i put my wings??
You romantic you!!
|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
|You've created an epic fantasy land. I can hear the sounds of the minstrals performing this in the courtyard. Lovely words and imagery.|
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Oh, wow! I'm sighing here... Handsum, this is awesome. Just awesome.
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Loved the picture! Your poem is fantastic too!
Great imagery of the heavens!
Thanks for reviews!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a woman could not resist this supernal seduction ... great write!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You should be selling these romantic writes of yours as Valentine Cards, my friend! You could make a fortune.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is absolutely beautiful in a wonderful mystical way.|
|Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
|Ron, what beautiful flights of fancy you draw with your words.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Wonderful write may your fantasy flight let you do all these things|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Yes Ron you draw such beautiful dreams for your love. You got it bad! And that is good! Your friend Bill|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Handsum you outdid yourself with this beauty! it is so majestic it soars to heights of glory!Bravo!|