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Bad News
by Donni De-Ville

Sunday, December 07, 2003
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Never take life or people for granted!

We had a fight and my baby,
just walked out the door.
He said he was leavin'
comin' back to me no more.

If he'd gone with a woman;
Could have wiped him from my mind.
At the door he said he loved me;
But all I could do was smile.

Now he's gone and I miss him.
He aint comin' back no more.
His things are all around me;
Even the clothes that he wore.

I got a letter this morning.
Wished I'd stayed in bed.
When I read that letter,
It said my baby was dead.

So listen to me people;
Don't let it happen to you.
Don't take your love for granted;
You could end in misery too.


Copyright 2004 Donni-Jay De-Ville

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Reviewed by Larry Rochelle 12/7/2003
This cautionary tale needs to be re-told. Thanks, Donni-Jay.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 12/7/2003
Oh my this hits a sobby nerve, so sad but so very wise and good!
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 12/7/2003
OUCH--ENOUGH SAID! Very well done. Makes me want to hug the ones I love a little harder and longer.

Thank You,
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/7/2003
Aside from the typos, very good. A lot of emotion.
Reviewed by George Carroll 12/7/2003
Good country write. Sad
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