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A Perfect Day
by Scott D. Zachary

Sunday, December 07, 2003

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Bobbie's love spills over me like a silvery poetic shower.

A Perfect Day

By Scott D. Zachary

Awakened by the lips of an angel . . .
No purer view to a flawless day.
Gilded eyes sparkled like diamonds,
Lovingly exploring my soul’s recesses.

Hark! Bid low; won a small kingdom.
Hand-in-hand with my sweetest treasure,
We romped and explored our new lands.
Deer jettisoned like rockets before us.

From the pinnacle of our new realm,
She and I admired distant places.
We held each other close; a wind,
A bitter wind held us closer, yet.

In the middle of a broad grassy knoll,
I laid my angel down and kissed her.
Loving and grateful, she held me tight.
A perfect day transformed into night.

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Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 12/12/2003
There is nothing like love. Absolutely nothing like it!

I loved this: "Lovingly exploring my soulís recesses." <--Ooooh! Word play is top notch! WHAT an image.

This is probably my favorite poem of yours. Excellent work.

Thank You,
Emilie
Reviewed by anne cunningham 12/11/2003
hey, the riddle drew me in, but i'm going to have to come back and read more of your work. this was too sweet. :) -anne
Reviewed by jude forese 12/9/2003
very lovely poem ... well written ...
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 12/7/2003
Awwww, Scott! This is so tender and sweet. Absolutely wonderful!

Hugs,
Tami

PS. You might want to rethink this line, as "worser" is improper: "Against my worser judgement, I didnít." (Certainly not that poetry has to be proper, but it doesn't read well. To use the word "worse" would be proper, but I don't know if that really works well.)
Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry 12/7/2003
A masterful write of such beauty and tender emotion, Scott. ~~Bonnie Q
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 12/7/2003
Scott, I get a smile everytime I read about the small kingdom & this is an excellent love poem as well...lucky Mrs Z!
Peace, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)
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