|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Powerful work Sara…the concluding couplet…is perfect…ty, Dani
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was outstanding, beautiful and wise advice, lovely,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|well done! ... enjoyed reading ...|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Sara.....outstanding write...love n luck....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Great work, Sara. Beautifully done
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|The end rhyme is perfect as is the poem. Much enjoyed my friend.
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|That booze I drank must have raised my level too, I know I reviewed this one, alas, I had not.|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I love the positive ness in your excellent write|
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
So let’s work, learn, teach, love
Drawing our energy from within, not above
..much wisdom in this piece..ty!!!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Sara I really like this confident write.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wow!! Yes illumination is the key!!
Most outstanding illimitable Illuminato!!