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Is it raining inside you?
by Kay P M- Devenish

Wednesday, December 10, 2003

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Raining pain.

Is it raining there inside you?
It LOOKS as if there's rain.
The way you walk,
the way you talk,
those eyes so deep with pain.

I know you're not the type to cry,
you bear all that you can,
but pain's deep trace engraves your face,
and indicates...'a dam.'

Is it raining in those walls,
those walls of flesh and veins?
There's a thunder when you move,
that says...'INSIDE... it rains.'

Don't let your walls store the rain,
don't hold it there for years,
open up your window eyes,
and drip out stormy tears.
Un-dam the bolted upstairs door,
let words of turbulence out-pour.
Let the waves inside tide out,
whisper drips, or spurt a shout.

Is it raining in your walls...
the walls that dam your pain?
Release the well,
life's burden tell,
My friend...let out your rain.

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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk 7/4/2004
This one is excellent.
Sometimes we build up the walls inside of us, to keep love and emotions out as we don't want to get hurt anymore. But what if something inside of us has to get out? The only way is to break down these walls again.
Enjoyed this one very much
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/12/2003
Therapeutic advice lovingly expressed. Thank you. I can use some. Love and peace, Regis.
Reviewed by Trixie Love 12/12/2003
Hi Dearest Kay,
This is a real keeper...
Outstanding words...

Hope all is well with you.

Love & Hugs,
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 12/12/2003
it's always raining inside of me, I think I need to put up some gutters to catch and carry off my rainwater
beautiful work Kay
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 12/12/2003
Kay, beautiful and wise advice in this excellent poem!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 12/12/2003
Kay...wonderful write...enjoyed much!!!!
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 12/11/2003
Right on, this is excellent advice and poetry. Also, I love the art piece by you on your bio. Happy Holidays.

Love, Janet xoxoxo
Reviewed by Paul Berube 12/11/2003
Kay, beautiful poem. It's never healthy to hold it in.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/11/2003
Thank you for sharing this Kay!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese 12/10/2003
when our minds become soaked with stormy weather a little emotional rain certainly refreshes things ... excellent poem!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 12/10/2003
Beautiful and compassionate poem..

Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/10/2003
Kay what a wonderful poem! great content and advice wrapped in your special way that's just beautifully okay when it's from our Kay!;-)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 12/10/2003
Excellent advice and well written!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 12/10/2003
This is quite beautiful Kay, I enjoyed it immensely (sp?), peace, Ed & rufuz
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/10/2003
Wonderful poem, Kay, and Excellent Advice!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 12/10/2003
Beautifully done in your special way. I love this Kay.
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 12/10/2003
Un-dam the bolted upstairs door,
let words of turbulence out-pour

..think I'll DO just that!!! thanks Kay...
Great write!!!
PS will reply to your mail tomorrow..oxoxxoox

Vesna :)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 12/10/2003
No not now, but when I do my boots get full of tears.
This is a terrific write Kay..
Love ya!...........Ron
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 12/10/2003
Kay this is so wonderful and wise advice. A pleasure to read.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/10/2003

if i let out the rain, i'd drown everybody :)

beautiful, caring write--i live with pain twenty four seven, yet i go on, because i have one wants to hear of my troubles

i have it no worse than others...why add to their rain/pain?

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
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