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The Hot Head
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Sunday, December 14, 2003

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Still feeling lousy...but trying to laugh the 'flu away (GO AWAY, DAMN 'FLU!).

FEVER all consuming fire
COOLING RELIEF
i desire

my head is
HOTTER THAN A FLAME
I'M SEEING THINGS--GOING INSANE (not really)

FEVER FEVER
eyes burning bright
i'm
HOT COLD
shiver in the night

FEED A COLD or STARVE A FEVER
CAN'T RECALL--WHAT *IS* THE RELIEVER

FEVER FEVER PLEASE go away
and
DON'T COME BACK another day...

'cause right now i am a HOT HEAD
LEAVE ME 'LONE--GOIN' BACK TO BED

(C) Karla Dorman, 2003.  :(

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/15/2003
Auchhhhhh!! Feell better soon okay!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 12/15/2003
Karla I am praying for you ...take care of yourself...floria
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 12/14/2003
Sorry you are feeling so lousy get feeling better ..God Bless ~Michelle~
Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry 12/14/2003
Have someone pickup some Asafoetida from an herbal store: one dropperful in a few ounces of grapefruit juice, take as often as every two hours. It is stout stuff but will kill any virus around PDQ! Great write, Karla. ~~Bonnie Q
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 12/14/2003
Very colorful in your miseries, dear Karla. Feel better soon!

{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}
Reviewed by jude forese 12/14/2003
the flu sure makes us feel blue ... feel better ...
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/14/2003
You gave your Twink the flu? Shame on you! Now rest up and get better.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 12/14/2003
OH it is sad when one feels so bad...
Take care.

Peg
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/14/2003
Colorful anyway. Hope that you are better, soon. Ron
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 12/14/2003
I think I have the way to pay the boss back for giving you his virus. Once his bug stops biting, give it back to him again, with a big kiss, preferably in front of a camera so that you can send it to his wife, boy won't that get him in trouble fast! Peace and love, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang 12/14/2003
I like the colors! I hope you
get better soon! Will be praying for
you! Thanks for my reviews!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 12/14/2003
I'll keep praying for your return to good health. Fun write! Love the colour choices.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/14/2003
I can see by all the colors that you're out of sorts;-)hahaha
Hope you'll be well soon! Don't forget vitaman C liquids and rest!
Great rant and style;-)!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/14/2003
(((Folks)))

she IS a hothead, and she SHARED her flu with me! now I am a hothead, too! (and i have a good reason to be; right now i am MAD at her! LOL)

(((and Karla)))

a rather colorful write about a not so fun event; hope you feel better soon! (thanks for sharing your DANGED flu with me! i REALLY appreciate your thoughtfulness...NOT!! but it's REALLY our boss's fault; HE is the one to blame! LOL); enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your (sick) twin, karen lynn. :) *cough, cough*
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