The Hot Head
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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Still feeling lousy...but trying to laugh the 'flu away (GO AWAY, DAMN 'FLU!).
FEVER all consuming fire
COOLING RELIEF i desire
my head is HOTTER THAN A FLAME
I'M SEEING THINGS--GOING INSANE (not really)
FEVER FEVER eyes burning bright
i'm HOT COLD shiver in the night
FEED A COLD or STARVE A FEVER
CAN'T RECALL--WHAT *IS* THE RELIEVER
FEVER FEVER PLEASE go away
and DON'T COME BACK another day...
'cause right now i am a HOT HEAD
LEAVE ME 'LONE--GOIN' BACK TO BED
(C) Karla Dorman, 2003. :(
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Auchhhhhh!! Feell better soon okay!!
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Karla I am praying for you ...take care of yourself...floria|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Sorry you are feeling so lousy get feeling better ..God Bless ~Michelle~|
|Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
|Have someone pickup some Asafoetida from an herbal store: one dropperful in a few ounces of grapefruit juice, take as often as every two hours. It is stout stuff but will kill any virus around PDQ! Great write, Karla. ~~Bonnie Q|
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|Very colorful in your miseries, dear Karla. Feel better soon!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the flu sure makes us feel blue ... feel better ...|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You gave your Twink the flu? Shame on you! Now rest up and get better.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|OH it is sad when one feels so bad...
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Colorful anyway. Hope that you are better, soon. Ron|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I think I have the way to pay the boss back for giving you his virus. Once his bug stops biting, give it back to him again, with a big kiss, preferably in front of a camera so that you can send it to his wife, boy won't that get him in trouble fast! Peace and love, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|I like the colors! I hope you
get better soon! Will be praying for
you! Thanks for my reviews!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I'll keep praying for your return to good health. Fun write! Love the colour choices.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I can see by all the colors that you're out of sorts;-)hahaha
Hope you'll be well soon! Don't forget vitaman C liquids and rest!
Great rant and style;-)!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
she IS a hothead, and she SHARED her flu with me! now I am a hothead, too! (and i have a good reason to be; right now i am MAD at her! LOL)
a rather colorful write about a not so fun event; hope you feel better soon! (thanks for sharing your DANGED flu with me! i REALLY appreciate your thoughtfulness...NOT!! but it's REALLY our boss's fault; HE is the one to blame! LOL); enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your (sick) twin, karen lynn. :) *cough, cough*